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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2002-02-12 09:09 PM


Oh soothing sponges of hope
Absorb me into it
Caress me in your gentle coarseness
Massage my senses with the warmth of needs
To allow me to wonder the seas of thoughts

Bring me the fragrance of you
In my swirling needs
By gently circulating me around the edges of ecstasy
Oh sponges color me in lust for me to join you
In the bath that will claim my spirit

In the baptism of love refreshed
In the blessings of my prayers
Claiming you in a sponge bath
That I can absorb you
In all the colors of eternal love

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I write so much that I may seem to be inconsiderate of others; I do apologize for my flaws.
D.Lester Young (02/12/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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1 posted 2002-02-12 09:13 PM


Your description is always so vivid. Nice work.

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