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jfreak
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0 posted 2002-02-12 01:31 PM


I figured we should have a little joust on who is the best Valentine poet...so I challenge anyone out there with my induction of...

"Dreamland"


Floating in a bubble of dreams
with little drips of light
dropping from the beams of heaven
like rain, but in after night
Each drop carries her picture
one a different from the other
Each drop a differnt mixture
Of the emotions that tug her
From man to man in search for I
and a longing in her heart to be undone
When we come together as Valentines
And we no longer shall be alone

[This message has been edited by jfreak (02-12-2002 05:13 PM).]

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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-02-12 01:43 PM


Nice write. I already did about 7 valentine poems..so..I guess they are all entered?
Anyway, this is a good one.
Sandra

jfreak
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2 posted 2002-02-12 05:12 PM


Well thank you Sandra...we used to do this all time.  Have a little competition of the sort, just to see what would take place you know.  See what people would come up with but I guess I am not the person to get it started.  LOL

J~

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3 posted 2002-02-12 06:10 PM


Hiya, Jfreak. Did you want us to add on our own thread or put them here in this thread?

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

jfreak
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4 posted 2002-02-12 06:52 PM


Hey it doesn't matter to me...if you post them here it might get crowded pretty quickly...so it might be best to post them seperately but just dictate in your title line that it's an entry in the Joust!

J~

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