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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-12 10:40 AM


Open your mouth
Say ahhhhhhhh.
Smile.
Pucker your lips.
Too bad
there is
Doctor/patient
relationship here.
You are such a
beautiful person.
I suggest you
sit upon the green
watch the chipmunks,
madame,
while the Balladeer
croons the Siofra
with Floria
and strbbux
in trio.
Languish
under the Mistletoe,
Angel,
awaiting your
Poet Devine.
A Moonlight Romeo
proffers kisses
and you Sy
while
Tiers
of joy
play paladin
on your cheeks
while you observe
a Melissa
Honeybee
gathering pollen.
Queen-like Regina
is 1 slick lady
and His Poet
rides with the
Lady in White
driving her RMW
on a Pilgrimage,
after leaving her tabby
with Long John,
heading to the land of
Tindal.
What joy life has to give
if only you will accept it.
Take two piptalks
and call me next week.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-02-12 10:44 AM


And the Lord said, Well done, my son! This is marvellous, Interloper. Very well done.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

amigo
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2 posted 2002-02-12 10:45 AM


WOW...the doc seems pretty busy...gotta call next week...i like this...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-02-12 10:47 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oooohhhhhh...thank you, doctor, this is the most beautiful gorgeous perscription of all, I LOVE IT!!! You cure us all with your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-12 10:48 AM


Doc, you are a smooth operator! PIP can cure a lot of ills, can't it?...and that's no bitter pill to swallow

Very nicely done, sir...

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5 posted 2002-02-12 11:00 AM


Silver Streak ~
Would that works would help but they don't, much.

Thanx

Amigo ~
Muchas gracias.  

Noah ~
When you gonna Email me about the duet?

Balladeer ~
Yup!  Makes the Doc's life MUCH easier

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-02-12 11:01 AM


That prescription works for me!
Sandra

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-02-12 11:02 AM


Interloper - nice write putting all the names in the poem.

BC

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8 posted 2002-02-12 11:22 AM



May your pharmaceutical supply NEVER run low of unique herbs, ointments and unguents with which to choose from....

Interloper
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9 posted 2002-02-12 11:31 AM


catalinamoon ~
Right on, Sandra

BC ~
Well, not all.  Thanx

Sunshine ~
I'll drink to that

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2002-02-12 11:39 AM


Whats a Siofra anyways?

Cool poem, Mister!

May I have an extra bottle of those, please?

I am many.

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11 posted 2002-02-12 11:42 AM


I'd like to know what a Siofra is too.  

And, do Moonlight Romeos only exist in words??

Thank you Sir, I am honored.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

[This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (02-12-2002 11:42 AM).]

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12 posted 2002-02-12 11:50 AM


Siofra ~
Everybody knows a Siofra is a song sung by "little elfs" in Ireland

Moonlight Romeo ~
Ov corse not!   Interloper is not only a Moonlight Romeo, but a daylight romeo, and an anytime romeo who happily sings Siofras

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2002-02-12 11:56 AM


Little Elves dance happily with the thought that you would know whats behind the name.


Well..I should certainly say that a Moonlight Romeo exists in more than just words....
and I'll agree with you, Sir Interloper that a Moonlight Romeo sings Siofras with the most great and wonderous of voices for I have heard.


I am many.

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14 posted 2002-02-12 12:02 PM


Cool write there Doc Love!
Enjoyed the prescription!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

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15 posted 2002-02-12 12:09 PM


I would say that a Moonlight Romeo sings only for a Siofra.

And, of course, to one as well, with love's purest voice.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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16 posted 2002-02-12 12:12 PM


With refills, please!!
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17 posted 2002-02-12 12:22 PM


Siofra ~
Being half Irish, my people came from County Cork, I should know more than I do.  And, should I ever forget, there are my favorite Celtic sites.

Enchantress ~
OK!  The bill is in the mail

Moonlight Romeo ~
Hmmmmmmm.  Sounds like you have a bit af Casanova in your blood as well

Duncan ~
I just called it in ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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18 posted 2002-02-12 01:32 PM


Hey! This means I'm not a patient
loved this  

Interloper
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19 posted 2002-02-12 03:40 PM


SEA ~
Is that good or bad?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA
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20 posted 2002-02-12 05:35 PM


that would be goooooood lol
no dr./patient code would get broke lol

Interloper
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21 posted 2002-02-12 05:40 PM


SEA ~
Hah

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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22 posted 2002-02-12 07:32 PM


you interlooped 'em all in here, PipDoc!

i loved it!! Passions is the peri-scription i've been taking every day and night for so long no wonder i feel GREAT... !!!!

hehe.... this is a great tribute to a great place...... it's sorta like a SPA to me... because i have such Special Poetic Associations with so many wonderful poets!!

wonderful!!!!

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23 posted 2002-02-12 07:39 PM


OH this is simply wonderful. thanks for including me Interloper, I love the ending, Take two pip talks and call me in a week. LOL...Pip talks cures all ills, and I do thank you for this wonderful poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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24 posted 2002-02-12 08:53 PM


what's up doc? giggle...helen
walker
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25 posted 2002-02-12 09:01 PM


And the doctor is in.....interloper I love it.
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26 posted 2002-02-13 10:19 AM


Doreen ~
Wow, what a reply.  They are few and far between and I savor each of them

strbbux ~
You are just too nice.  Thank you, dear lady!

1slick_lady ~
Eh, wascally wabbit


Walker ~
It is better for your having read it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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