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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-12 09:20 AM


Passion

"Their hearts are like an oven; they approach him with intrigue.
Their passion smolders all night; in the morning it blazes like a flaming fire"
NIV Hosea 7:6

Passion, made by God
Released by Adam, one day
Put Eve in Bondage.

Now Eve holds Adam
In the fire of her bosom
And he must obey.

Passion.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
February 12, 2002

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-12 09:54 AM


Silver,
Very good.

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-12 09:56 AM


Thank you, Seymour, for dropping in.
-newell

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Marsha
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3 posted 2002-02-12 10:14 AM


Newell darling boy Oh WOW when YOU write you really write, this is utterly utterly fabulous.

Absolutely perfect poetry


Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself darling boy. I could sip from the honey of your words endlessly, you are a delight and a joy


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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4 posted 2002-02-12 10:17 AM


He might as well obey after that terrible mistake he made.  We are all paying for it today unless and until we take the second Adam into our hearts.
Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-02-12 10:23 AM


Dear Newell,
This is so short and evocative. Wonderful.

Nan

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-12 10:38 AM


Marsha, darling girl. Again, I am deeply humbled and honored by your words of honey. Thank you sweet, sweet Mushy! xo
((Marsha))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-02-12 10:40 AM


Interloper, you are absolutely correct!
-newell

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Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-02-12 10:40 AM


Thank you, Nan.
-newell

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jfreak
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9 posted 2002-02-12 01:42 PM


Again bro...ballsy...very good...Very short and too the point.

J~

Silver Streak
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10 posted 2002-02-12 01:58 PM


Thank you, jfreak.

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