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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2002-02-11 08:17 PM

You

You are
The sole reason
My heart dances with joy
Why this smile graces my lips
Why I laugh every day
It’s all because
Of you
*
I know
I’m so lucky
To have the gift of you
Shining so bright here in my life
I will strive to show you
How amazing
You are
*
I swear
To stand by you
Through good and bad, always
My love waiting to soothe away
The fear and frustrations
That haunt your soul
Your heart
*
My life
Is now complete
My soul made whole by you
You fill me with such happiness
Something I’ve never known
All because I
Love you.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-11-2002 08:26 PM).]

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-11 08:20 PM

aaawwwww! you are shining so brightly right now! Love looks good on you Tara

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-11 08:23 PM

Tara, these are fantastic!!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-11 08:23 PM

This is really beautiful Tara.
Your love for Dave really shines through.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-11 08:24 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know that soon you and Dave will meet and he will forever fill your heart with happiness and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so so much, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2002-02-11 09:35 PM

Tara - Interesting style you used for this romantic write. Very good.

Dave

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-02-11 09:40 PM

Well done Tara...excellent work on this...

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2002-02-11 10:46 PM

Damn, I wish I’d written these. What a lovely, lovely way to tell him how much he means to you. This is gorgeous Tara. He’s going to love it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

8 posted 2002-02-11 11:56 PM

*loves it*

/* loves the girl more tho */

-Dave

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2002-02-12 12:01 PM

This is the most wonderful poem ever written for me! Huh? Confused? I'm confused? Whaddaya mean he's confused? He's constantly confused? Now I AM confused!!

er, I'll get back to ya....

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

10 posted 2002-02-12 12:24 PM

Confused? Confuser? Cornfuser? Cornfuzzler? Cornholer? Kevin Bacon?

.....Whoa!

-Dave

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-02-13 10:21 AM

Whoa ... FOUR rictameters! A plethora of poetry!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

12 posted 2002-02-13 10:23 AM

This is wonderful, Tara. As is Love!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 10:24 AM).]

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