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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-02-11 07:59 PM



Message In a Bowl
By Larry Chadwick



I couldn’t believe my eyes,
Although the message was true.
It’s never been done before,
But I was glad it was from you.

I poured myself some leftover soup,
And knew it was made by you.
Warmed it in the microwave,
Sat at a table for one not two.

Closed my eyes and said a prayer,
And picked up my spoon to start.
A message from you and Campbell’s,
Alphabets right from your heart:

“I  L-O-V-E  Y-O-U”

February 11, 2002





© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-11 08:01 PM


Awww... sooooo sweet...

~Tier

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2 posted 2002-02-11 08:02 PM


Hello Larry

This was brilliant and very cute, I loved it.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-02-11 08:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo sweet and cute, sweet friend, I too remember when I was a boy I used to have alphabet soup too and I used to hunt for words like a Scrabble game! (giggles) This is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-11 08:33 PM


Larry,

    To echo Tiersdin.. Awwwwwwww! You have been making me smile constantly lately Thank you for that

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2002-02-11 08:40 PM


I like this Larry C.  Nicely done....
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6 posted 2002-02-11 09:14 PM


damn Larry, this is a keepr....how completely romantic *sigh*
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7 posted 2002-02-11 09:19 PM


Tier,
Ahhh...Thanks.

Sue,
Wow...Thanks.

Noah,
It is still soup season. Thanks.

Tara,
So cool...Thank you so much.

Magnus.
And thank you sir!

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8 posted 2002-02-11 09:20 PM


Susan,
Well...I didn't know! Thanks.

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9 posted 2002-02-11 11:07 PM


mmm mmm Good, mmm mmm Good, thats what
campbell soups are mmm mmm Good....


Nice....what a creative way to say it...

Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-11-2002 11:07 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-02-11 11:18 PM


Lauren,
See...that's what I like about you...you're mmm good! Thanks friend.

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