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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars


0 posted 02-11-2002 06:06 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Each day I watch you from afar
I gaze across the way
I never show my feelings
As I see you walk away.
You stole my heart so long ago
Today you have it still
I want to get to know you
But I know I never will.
I'd like to talk to you
And hear what you have to say
But every time I catch your eye
I quickly look away.
But if you need someone to talk to
When you're sad, alone, or scared
And you don't know who to turn to
Remember that I care.

2-11-02
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© Copyright 2002 Elizabeth Costello Larson - All Rights Reserved
brianbeaudry
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1 posted 02-11-2002 06:09 PM       View Profile for brianbeaudry   Email brianbeaudry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit brianbeaudry's Home Page   View IP for brianbeaudry

Beautiful...simply beautiful!!!! Life is too short for looking back and wishing that!!go for it hun, it may be the beautiful beginning of the rest of your life!!!
Tiersdin
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2 posted 02-11-2002 06:09 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

This is so wonderful, Sky...

enjoyed!

~Tier
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Riding


3 posted 02-11-2002 06:18 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Wow. Welcome to Passions! What an excellent first post!

It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots.

SEA
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with you


4 posted 02-11-2002 06:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

awwww,   this is soooo sweet   perfect for Valentine's Day! Welcome to the family  

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-11-2002 06:30 PM).]

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5 posted 02-11-2002 07:00 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Welcome, skyshine (love yer name!) and I like the tenderness of this. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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The heart of you


6 posted 02-11-2002 07:02 PM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

Nothing speaks so as the pain of unrequited love.

Thank you, and welcome.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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City of Roses


7 posted 02-11-2002 07:08 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



YAY!!! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo compassionately beautiful, your loving caring heart shines out in every word! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Skyshine, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Somewhere in time~


8 posted 02-11-2002 07:14 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Welcome to Passions Skyshine! This is a perfect entrance to Passions with a Valentine poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting)

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Listening to every heart


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Welcome to Passions! I DO like your name! I hope you find the poetic home you've been looking for, as we are "quite the family!" in all sense of the word!

Hope to see more from you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

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10 posted 02-11-2002 07:32 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

Welcome to poetry land! You will love it here Nice first post
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Welcome to Passions, skyshine! Go for the gold! No.  Love isn't a game, but it certainly is a quest isn't it? I'm with Brian on this, let this guy know he caught your eye (and maybe your )
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars


12 posted 02-12-2002 12:31 AM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Brian, thank you for the support! I don't know when next I'll see him, but I'll try to stop and talk to him for a little bit.

Thanks for the read, Tiersdin!

Glad you liked it, Skyfire.

Thank you Sea, I thought it was appropriate.

Serenity, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. (I like my name too!)

Moonlight Romeo, yeah, it does hurt....but if it's meant to be it'll work out.

Mistletoe Angel, thank you for the enthusiastic welcome and reply to my poem!

Thank you Enchantress! I'll check my e-mail right away.

Thank you Sunshine! Nice name.

RosePetal, thank you for the welcome and the read!

Midnitesun, yes, love is a quest, and I'm hoping that soon I'll find what I am looking for.

Thank you everyone for your kindness and your welcome. This poem may not be one of my best, but it is certainly close to me. Thanks again, you all!

sky
Larry C
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13 posted 04-10-2002 11:47 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Skyshine,
I had no idea what a rare gem this is! If this isn't near your best I'd like to see what is. This is truly a delightful poem. Somebody missed a very golden opportunity. All I can say is shame on them. Well done.
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars


14 posted 04-18-2002 11:10 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Thank you Larry! I've talked to him a few times, but I still haven't decided whether or not to show this to him. Your words mean a lot to me. Thank you.

sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

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15 posted 07-26-2002 10:44 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Awww... S' sweet an' sad.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

skyshine
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16 posted 08-02-2002 03:30 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Thanks Mikey! I like your screen name!

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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yeah! I like!
skyshine
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18 posted 02-02-2003 10:30 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Thanks passing shadows!

You can sit there and forgive someone until the cows come home, and it won't make a bit of difference until they forgive themselves.

 
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