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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-02-11 06:03 PM


Sweet love
We are one flesh
Passion burns within me
Your lips whisper eternity
We fly


© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
brianbeaudry
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1 posted 2002-02-11 06:06 PM


Ah...yes...the magical wings of love...it picks you up and wisks you away...I love this poem !!!
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-02-11 06:12 PM


Oh my. This is a beauty.

Nan

Jamie
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3 posted 2002-02-11 06:12 PM


Very nice Cinquain

I hope SEA doesn't see it-- she is in cinguain rehab yanno---lol

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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4 posted 2002-02-11 08:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love are always true gems! (kiss on cheek) May you forever fly with your love into eternity, sweet freind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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