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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 In retrospect of remember of how it used to be quick glance over shoulder past tense, you and me good bye said and learned in the proper form of speech a message in a bottle washed upon my beach cryptic words and symbols in a language no longer utilized besides I didn’t care what it said how could you be surprised? communication outdated and rejected your useless terminology nothing more than lies gone unread by me ~SEA~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is so sad, with a bitter touch to it. Good work SEA.  sky |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful and so sad. A jewel of expression. Thank you for sharing.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sad, but true, and I understand. The best poetry is the truth, I think! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This has a kind of brooding regret that makes one want to read whatever it was that went unread. Lovely as always SEA. :J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Powerful write Sea.......I felt the strength of conviction in your words and the force of finality (Hope finality is a word LOL)You penned this one from deep inside of you. Hugz of compassion dear friend!!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Bravo, SEA... Enjoyed reading! ~Tier |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I loved it! Thanks for sharing it! It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Susan, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you! (big hugggssssss) I hope all is better now, and that joy has replaced the hurt for you, you deserve the greatest happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, I always knew you were a smart woman...and sensitive too! What more could a guy ask for? You do know how and when to move on and I like that.  |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
In notes unread, go thoughts unheard. I liked the deafness of this. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A work of art!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, as always...beautiful poem and love the picture. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Skyshine~ definitely bitter LOL thank you Silver Sreak~thank you Serenity~ I agree, thank you! Jamie~ I have no regrets here…..thank you Brian~ you are awesome thank you Tier~ thank you bunches!! Skyfire~ and I thank you!! Noah~ don’t cry hon, it’s a good thing, really , thank you Larry~  thank you so muchMoonlight Romeo~ very cool, thank you Amusemi~ very kind of you, thank you Nancy~ I love this picture too, thank you |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Sea - Great way of expressing the ending of a relationship with no looking back. Very nice. Dave |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
quick glance over shoulder past tense, you and me ---------------------------- Oh...i like this so much, dear Susan...past tense is required in life, to know & enjoy the present and hope & wish for the future...i'm glad the blue ink is slowly, but surely drying out...making way for a different one.... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, this hits to the heart. Such emotion and revelation spoken here. Amazing what we find when we look back huh? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dave~ yes, it was just a quick glance, nothing more, thank you Amigo~ that blue ink is always on reserve LOL but yes, it’s just about finished for now,Thank you Tracey~ yes, a quick glance can remind us why we left in the first place, thank you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Susan,I love this. The photo is so gorgeous, but the words are even more so. I feel strength in here, going to save this for one of my blue nights. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In retrospect of remember~ that line says so much SEA~ I'm sorry you're hurting. Don't be letting it get the best of you. Life is too short to dwell on the things that we can not change. Take care~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Funny how to read an unread message still takes some need of "wanting to do" so... this is a keeper, little one.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How did I almost miss this? I NEVER miss your work! However, after reading it I felt strangely sad. Like I wanted to kiss it and make it better ... ya know? I love your work, gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love the resolve to this, SEA. Sometimes it seems there's nothing left to be said...or heard. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cryptic words and symbols in a language no longer utilized besides I didn't care what it said how could you be surprised? communication outdated and rejected your useless terminology nothing more than lies gone unread by me ============================= love the defiance and attitude in this... very cool write of strength and resolve girlie...stick back in the bottle and sink-sail the old ghosts out to sea  You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You write of sadness quite well, my friend. Nice writing, Susan. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, this is powerfully sad...very well written... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, as usual your words hold so much wisdom. Beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I didn't catch this one till everyone responded but I guess it's not too late for me to tell you that I loved this one! You know how I love sad ones. great job! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
...much applause for this one. Well done |
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