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. . . guilty of sensuality . . . Tanka
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. . . guilty of sensuality . . . Tanka |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
body heat for two essense of synergism multiplicity we are guilty as can be charge us with lovely union Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oooh this tanka is perfect! You've said it well!!  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Interloper, love your vocabulary in this peace, it just flows. floriaFloria |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
guilty of loving as our hearts and souls unite sweet crime of passion as we fan the flames higer taking delight in our guilt  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
RosePetal ~ Gee, thanx strbbux ~ I've been told I run off at the mouth SEA ~ you've given me life convicted me with my words the sentence given undiminished love eternally loving you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I take all the blame, gulity as charged. I love it. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are worse crimes, Interloper. At my age I just get charged with "Assault With a Dead Weapon"!  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
What guilt? What crime? This Love sublime? 'Tis riches beyond measure Enjoy! Enjoy! Both girl and boy This wealth in newfound treasure. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha, you are not a bit guilty I don't know the tanka form yet, or I would answer accordingly. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Don't know who you're seeing on the side but keep up the good writing! Lovely! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Walker ~ Ok, love for life SEA ~ I can't do that Balladeer~ That's a limp excuse Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (02-11-2002 04:19 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Silver Streak ~ Sure. Check out Songs of Solomon and Proverbs 5 Catalinamoon ~ Not ... guilty? Why not? I try real hard ethome ~ On ... my ... side? Any way I can Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Interloper, I love your tankas and haikus. The are so beautiful So well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
rosepetals25 ~ Tanka you very much Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, that was GOOD!!!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Balladeer ~ You don't think I stretched the thought a little bit? |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
short, to the point my fave lol *smiles evily* i mean...im a perfect angel..*is smiling evily* haha byes!Tifferz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper...I've always loved your tankas...among other things...  Yes! You are guilty as charged of sensuality! LOL@Balladeer's comments!  ~Hugs sweetie, Nancy~  ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
No crime in the sensuality of love, sweet man...I am glad you are guilty of such....for that is what it is all about...**big hugs** I love it...Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, it is always such a delight to read your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) Maybe sometime we can write a senryu string together, I would love to work with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Daydreamer ~ OK, if you say so ... Glad you liked it. Enchantress ~ Thank you so much. I'm glad you like my offerings. You got me embarrassed and I can't "talk." Startime ~ You sure know how to boost a guy's ego Noah ~ Send me an Email and we will duet my friend. Keep it up, the check is in the mail. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ sounds like a lovely dance....beautiful and sensual.... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-11-2002 07:17 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Greeneyes ~ Thank you very much Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I have to say that this one is lovely, and given this name, I am often charged with that sort of crime, Sir..but I enjoy it. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Temptress ~ {grins} Go figure Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So charged...James |
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