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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-11 11:28 AM


Holding hands

As we walk through our garden
holding hands
my fingers begin to tingle with electricity
as your power leaks inside of me
my heart begins to ring
I want to sing.

As we feel each other's sweetness
holding hands
I feel your love increasing tenderly
as I slowly walk with you so very close to me
my feet begin to dance
a sweet romance.

As we look at all God's beauty
holding hands
I feel His spirit growing stronger deep inside of me
as we view our little garden growing free
my heart is bursting with joy
I say a prayer of thanks for all His love
And thee,

Holding hands.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs Florida
July 30, 2001 rev February 11, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher - All Rights Reserved
His Poet
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1 posted 2002-02-11 11:31 AM


Very, very sweet, Newell. I enjoyed this!
Cheryl

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-02-11 11:45 AM


Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly fabulous writing, this is such a sweetly tenderly written poem. I swear I could see you walking with your hands entwined together

You really are an excellent writer I simply adore these poems of yours, they are as delicious as you are darling boy. Perfect poetry


Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy





To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-11-2002 03:21 PM).]

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-02-11 11:57 AM


This is a beautiful romantic poem, embedded with His love, lovely Newell. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-02-11 12:00 PM


Thank you, Cheryl. Glad you enjoyed.
((Cheryl))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-02-11 12:02 PM


Thank you, Marsha. You sweet words of honey nourish my soul.  
((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-11-2002 12:03 PM).]

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-11 12:03 PM


Thank you, floria, for you loving thoughts.
((floria))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

RosePetal
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7 posted 2002-02-11 01:02 PM


me likes this

Will you hold my hand Newell?

Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-02-11 01:25 PM


Of course I'll hold your hand, Joanna.
((Joanna))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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