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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-02-11 10:26 AM


I'm taking applications now
to be my valentine this year
the time is getting a bit close
no one has knocked to say "I'm here".

I think he should be kind of cute
and know how to write poetry
or paint a canvas beautiful
yes, he would be the one for me.

He should come carrying a rose
and say it's beauty can't compare
to all the love within his heart
He will know how to show he cares.

I'm hoping he will walk with me
upon the sands, under the moon
I really wish my valentine
would hurry up and find me soon.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-11 10:31 AM


Cat,
Enjoyed the poem, I know I'm not the one but I'm available tuesday's. LOL

Canuckster
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2 posted 2002-02-11 10:37 AM


Your Valentine, I cannot be,
I'm taken by another,
But I can try and help you see,
As a poetic brother.

The longing in the heart you have
Is very plain to me
Your beauty in the love you crave,
Displayed for all to see

An artist or a poet's love
May be hard to see,
But then again, like in hand in glove,
Your love sets talent free

Happy Valentines and hope your dreams come true.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Sven
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3 posted 2002-02-11 10:39 AM


I've given him a map. . . he'll be there on Thursday at 7:45 PM, EST. . .

I'm sure that the line will be pretty long, so. . . you might want to make some popcorn. . .

great job my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-11 11:08 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet Sandra, I am sure there are so many who would love to be your valentine, for you are such a wonderful person and we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) Love will come to you, sweet friend, may your true love sweep you off your feet soon! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-02-11 11:57 AM


LOL @ Sven!  Your Valentine will come, Sandra, probably when you're least expecting.  Like when you've got some cream all over your face, hair up in a towel, lousy headache and all settled in to watch those videos you just rented.  Knock, knock.
strbbux
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6 posted 2002-02-11 12:01 PM


I do hope he shows up Catalina, he would find a treasure indeed, nice poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-02-11 01:12 PM


One day he'll come along Sandra, and I wonder why Duncan thinks it will happen when you have cream on your face and your hair in a towel? LOL...That is just a myth that women put cream all over their faces and their hair up in towels.   
Right Sandra?....Sandra!!
~Luv & Hugs, Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-11-2002 04:03 PM).]

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2002-02-11 01:18 PM


When he gets there could you see if he has a brother for me?

Your prince will come someday....I'd be willing to bet on it!

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-02-11 01:19 PM


He'll find you soon, dear Catalinamoon!

loved this!

*smiles*

~Tier

RosePetal
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10 posted 2002-02-11 02:20 PM


dont worry , mr right will come a knockin'!
I dont have a valentine either, how about we have a girls night out?

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2002-02-11 03:46 PM


catalinamoon - I'm here, really I am, was out walking the beach but came back just to read this poem. It's me, BC, yours to be, hehehe....

BC

ethome
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12 posted 2002-02-11 04:01 PM


He'll be along because you're too nice to have to go without him.  I predict he will show up when you least expect it!   Good poem by the way, a very enjoyable read!
Startime
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13 posted 2002-02-11 06:14 PM


*giggling* ohhhh Sandra you landed one of the most romantic poets...snap him up girl....*giggling* I truly hope you have a wonderful Valentine Day...I so hope you find love soon..you are so very deserving. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Moonlight Romeo
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14 posted 2002-02-11 06:59 PM


I see that there is a line, so, I shall take my place in it.  Softly done.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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