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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-02-10 10:26 PM


Inspired by Mistletoe Angel

I'm Yours
To Hug
To Kiss
Do as you wish
Hold me tight
Reside in my eyesight
Make me blush
An innocent crush
love me
Unconditionally
Say we're an item
Offically
Be Mine
I'm Yours


© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-10 10:28 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! (kiss on lips) I will always love you, my sweet Gwenevere, for you will always be mine! You have such a beautiful heart, my Aphrodite, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-10 10:29 PM


Joanna,
you are such a pretty girl, and this is wonderfully sweet, you and Noah are so sweet with each other

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-02-10 10:40 PM


Joanna, this is soooo sweet!
You know I love ya, and Noah too!
~Hugs sweetie, luv Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-02-10 11:01 PM


RosePetal - I'm sure he will see this, and he'll know your his, for I'm sure he's yours...

BC

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5 posted 2002-02-10 11:10 PM


Awwww.....to go back and have that love...thanks for the memory....sooooo beautiful....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-10 11:15 PM


This is soooooooo beautiful. God bless you both!
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Startime
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7 posted 2002-02-11 12:14 PM


Standing Ovation..this is absolutely wonderful..The perfect match to Noah...I love it...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C
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8 posted 2002-02-11 01:24 AM


Joanna,
I'm thinking this is a powerful invitation...maybe a blank check! Well...there's a real valentine for you! wow.

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9 posted 2002-02-11 01:36 AM


You and Noah want to go out on a double date?  You're too young to remember those, aren't you?  Well, it's like when two couples go out to the drive-in (too young to remember those, too huh?...lol).  We get the back seat, though!
N orth Carolina Girl
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10 posted 2002-02-11 06:26 AM


RosePetal,another lovely poem! ENJOYED!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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11 posted 2002-02-11 07:50 AM


Oh I love this, Joanna. Very sweet and full of emotion. Reminds of the way I'm feeling at the moment.

Thanks for posting. Much enjoyed.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

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12 posted 2002-02-11 12:30 PM


A guy would be CRAZY to not accept this along with your beautiful face, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RosePetal
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13 posted 2002-02-11 02:03 PM


Sea: Thank you for that sweet reply! You've just made me smile really big

Enchantress: I love getting replies from you, they are so warm and loving! thanx

Greeneyes: your welcome, and thank you for stopping in!!

Silver Steak: Your comments are greatly appreciated (hugs)

Startime: I'm just an ameture compared to you sweet poetess! Thank U

Larry C: You're always so humorous, you make me laugh! Thank u hun

Duncan: LOL, sure lets do that double date! I've only been to a drive in once, since they arent popular anymore because of all the new huge theatres with stadium seats.

NC Girl: thank you for reading and replying!
(hugs)

anonymousfemale: thanks a bunch, you've made me day sweetie.

Strbbux: you make me blush, I just love hearing from you! you are so nice.
(hugs)

RosePetal
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14 posted 2002-02-11 02:04 PM


oops somehow I missed you Bill...Thank you kind sir! Any friend of Noah's is a friend of mine!!!!
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15 posted 2002-02-11 02:42 PM


I just had a whole box of those candy hearts Your poem was definetely better digested
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16 posted 2002-02-11 03:42 PM


I like candy hearts. Now if only real love would be as sweet.
Sandra

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17 posted 2002-02-11 04:24 PM


Wow! Noah is a lucky guy......This is so sweet that it could be read over and over for a lifetime............Good work!
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Deep in the heart
18 posted 2002-02-11 05:38 PM


Move over, Noah, I'd like to accept this invitation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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19 posted 2002-02-11 05:59 PM


RosePetal, you penned this one from your heart dear friend, it absolutly glows with the essence and innocence of purest love. You graced this visage with a heartwarming smile with this poem, thank you!!!
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20 posted 2002-02-11 11:28 PM


This is so pretty Joanna. What a great inspiration Noah is to you. I just love reading both of your poems to each other. Isn’t love a wonderful thing?   (and I'm laughing at Duncan's reply up there...backseat huh darlin???...race ya lol)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (02-11-2002 11:28 PM).]

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2002-02-12 12:03 PM


Joanna I know that Noah is hungry for that first sweet kiss...James
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22 posted 2002-02-12 01:29 AM


This is so yummy, Joanna...I remember loving those candy hearts when I was a kid.......
I would love to have a box of them right now.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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23 posted 2002-02-13 11:34 PM



Joanna-
   This is so adorably sweet.
   Much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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