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Tree Of Woes
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Tree Of Woes |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Shaded black against the stars shining white disguised as living breath of the giving Harsh is the coldness brought forth by the Night with its wounds binding its pain so finding Hanging tough, limb from limb, her Tree of Woe's thoughts neverending always defending Deep rooted are these aches of such sorrows victory the spoils bathed so in their soils But what if Day breaks surrounding her soul will she soon forget only she will know |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
But what if Day breaks surrounding her soul will she soon forget only she will know" Craig~ you surround the soul with words.... another wonderful write to add to my collection..HUGS..   Lauren~ Step through the |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Each verse in this could stand on it's own. Really nice writing~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Craig, Wow.. this is sooo wonderful  I don't even know what to say about it but.. wow. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hanging tough, limb from limb, her Tree of Woe's thoughts neverending always defending Intense write! This part especially, struck me. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent write, Craig. Good to see you. Sandra |
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