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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-02-10 05:09 PM



Renewal

Dark mystical sky overhead,
Heavy clouds drifting as rain they shed.
Fog rolling in like drapes on a stage
Chill felt within, must turn the page.

Bright light breaking into a new day.
Sky is awakening to show us the way.
Stars are all sleeping tucked into the sky.
Moon in safekeeping till nighttime comes by.

Tree leaves all singing as they dance.
Clouds are clinging to blue sky enhanced.
Sun rising high to brighten the day.
Rain drops take bows as they vapor away.

With the renewal of each lovely day,
Grasp each new jewel of this earths buffet.
Welcome the sun, the birth of each morn.
For when one drifts on, another is born.

Floria Kelderhouse © 2002
All Rights Reserved

[This message has been edited by strbbux (02-10-2002 05:10 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Floria Kelderhouse - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2002-02-10 05:25 PM


With the renewal of each lovely day,
Grasp each new jewel of this earths buffet.
Welcome the sun, the birth of each morn.
For when one drifts on, another is born.

Your words are uplifting and beautifully penned.
This is just what I needed.  
Thank you Floria~


Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-02-10 05:58 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Floria...

and absolutely true.
Very well written!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-02-10 06:01 PM


Floria, beautifully written...great imagery..
What a wonderful vision and poem..

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4 posted 2002-02-10 06:01 PM



Oh Floria, This is so refreshing!
I love the sky and all of it's many images!
We are indeed renewed each day!
God bless your beautiful heart sweet Floria!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2002-02-10 06:08 PM


I love the imagery in this...

well done!

~Tier

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-02-10 06:26 PM


Thank you Blues, I am glad it helped you, I kind of needed it this week too. thanks much for replying, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-02-10 06:27 PM


Thank you Lyra, you have no idea how much I enjoy the picture you put on my poetry. thank you   floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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8 posted 2002-02-10 06:28 PM


Thank you Magnus, I haven't been able to write, I guess it is coming back slowly, thanks much floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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9 posted 2002-02-10 06:29 PM


Thank you Noah for your uplifting words and your support. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-02-10 06:29 PM


Thank you Tier, so much for your support. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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11 posted 2002-02-11 01:18 PM


Yes!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

N orth Carolina Girl
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12 posted 2002-02-11 02:17 PM


Floria,this amazing and so beautiful.


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13 posted 2002-02-11 03:03 PM


Beautiful, Floria and I suddenly feel renewed. Great descriptive verses. Cheryl
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14 posted 2002-02-11 03:06 PM


floria, this is brilliantly beautiful.
((floria))
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15 posted 2002-02-11 03:49 PM


Yes, this is wonderful. Beautiful thoughts to leave with as I now have to go to work  
Sandra

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ethome
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16 posted 2002-02-11 03:57 PM


Beautifully written!!  Wonderful writing! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
strbbux
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17 posted 2002-02-11 05:51 PM


Interloper, thanks much floria

North Carolina, so glad you enjoyed it floria

Cheryl thanks for your reply floria

Newell, thank you much floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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18 posted 2002-02-11 05:52 PM


ET thank you, much, hmmmmm, have you called home yet? LOL  floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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19 posted 2002-02-11 05:53 PM


Catalina Moon, thank you , so sorry you have to go to work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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