Open Poetry #18 |
Mists of Imagination |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I reach, not blinking. Afraid you will disappear into the mists of my imagination. Fingers trembling, heart pounding, tears welling. I watch you swim through the depths of my joy. Until at last my eyes flutter allowing the tears to run their course. And I sigh, feeling your fingers entwine with mine. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aw, this is sweet, it reminded me of falling into my loves arms, this is incredible, love it sweetie! Joanna |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Softly romantic... enjoyed! ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Awwww Lucie! I know just what you mean! Tears of joy are the best kind! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Lucie! Thank you for sharing with us! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...touching, and ever so gentle. Enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lucie, Awwwwwwww I LOVE this!!!! It is so sweet... so touching. I'm very glad I stopped in to see this one Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lucie, you romantic little devil, you! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This reads like a moment paused and then the tears. *sigh* I LOVE what this did to me. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lucie~ This is just beautiful.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A beautiful moment captured so nicely Loved it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I sigh, feeling your fingers entwine with mine. ================================= yeppers...thats the moment of content isnt it...makes me sigh too. This is beautiful poetess Lucie...good to see you back. Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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