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Lucie
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0 posted 2002-02-10 05:02 PM


I reach,
not blinking.
Afraid you will
disappear into the
mists of my imagination.

Fingers trembling,
heart pounding,
tears welling.

I watch you swim
through the depths
of my joy.

Until at last
my eyes flutter
allowing the tears
to run their course.

And I sigh,
feeling your fingers entwine with mine.

© Copyright 2002 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-10 06:09 PM


Aw, this is sweet, it reminded me of falling into my loves arms, this is incredible, love it sweetie!

Joanna

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2 posted 2002-02-10 06:12 PM


Softly romantic...

enjoyed!

~Tier

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3 posted 2002-02-10 06:14 PM



Awwww Lucie! I know just what you mean!
Tears of joy are the best kind!
You have such a beautiful heart sweet Lucie!
Thank you for sharing with us!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-10 06:52 PM


Lovely...touching, and ever so gentle.
Enjoyed.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-02-10 08:48 PM


Lucie,

    Awwwwwwww I LOVE this!!!! It is so sweet... so touching.  I'm very glad I stopped in to see this one

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2002-02-10 10:08 PM


Lucie, you romantic little devil, you!
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7 posted 2002-02-10 10:50 PM


This reads like a moment paused and then the tears. *sigh* I LOVE what this did to me.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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8 posted 2002-02-10 10:53 PM


Lucie~


This is just beautiful....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2002-02-11 09:05 AM


A beautiful moment captured so nicely

Loved it

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10 posted 2002-02-13 06:56 PM


And I sigh,
feeling your fingers entwine with mine.
=================================
yeppers...thats the moment of content isnt it...makes me sigh too.
This is beautiful poetess Lucie...good to see you back.

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

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