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ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2002-02-10 01:09 PM

   Miracles in Dreams

   Shades of grey pass by, lonely tho they lie
   all of a singer's songs, in her heart they belong
   Why she touches him not, are dream distances forsaken foes?
   Never a shadowed doubt, while persistence and longing grow

   Leaning a heart to yours, mystery moment doors
   shyly open stricken will, blue light of love fulfill
   Dreams in common they share, wispy murmurs kneel
   miracles meet, tho unaware - on stages of airy teal

   Rest, dear one, for the night is ours
   for all others, I do happily forsake
   And as you dream, when you feel my hand
   from quiet slumbers, with a kiss, you'll awake
      with our lips together, then you'll awake
                  ~    ~    ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-02-10 01:19 PM

Shades of grey pass by, lonely tho they lie
   all of a singer's songs, in her heart they belong
   Why she touches him not, are dream distances forsaken foes?
   Never a shadowed doubt, while persistence and longing grow

Pretty nice SR, I've missed reading your words.  I hope you're well.

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

2 posted 2002-02-10 01:28 PM

Hi LA!  How's the rays there? *s*  Thanks for saying: Hey!  Haven't been around
much.  Wrote a couple of stories, and posted one in Passions/prose section.
May post the other one later.  aww...i am fine, no complaints.  You been ok,
too?  hope so.

Hey, you have a great Sunday, and don't forget about the NBA allstar game!
Ok, maybe the Lakers have some studs on there, but Jermaine O'Neal is
the bomb!  hehehe
tSR

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-10 03:03 PM

Jeff, this is lovely! Very nice!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-10 03:10 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic heart always shines with so much love to give! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-02-10 03:46 PM

ShadowRider,
I don't know that I've read your work before but I will certainly be reading again. This is almost a song.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

6 posted 2002-02-10 06:20 PM

Dreams and shadows tied
with satin ribbon around heart sighs
a miracle we are, now more than aware
of all we have and will share

Thank you sweetheart for this beautiful
valentine, you are Wunerful...*g*

Again? ~~sly grin~~

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2002-02-10 08:43 PM

Beautiful and sweet!! Great piece!

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

8 posted 2002-02-10 10:42 PM

Enchantress Lady: You had me for a second there! I almost forget i have a Christian name! LOL Thank you Nancy for your sweet reply.

Mistletoe Angel (Noah-Dude): Hi Buddy! heck, i am not half as nice as you are
in reading and replying to all these poems. You are one special guy!

Kethry: I don't post a heck of a lot here, or too many places these days, so
I can't blame ya for not seeing my work (iffen ya can call it that!) around.
Pleased to meet you, and warm thank youse!

Dulcinea:  I will thank you for your reply in person.   You deserved a special Valentine's poem.

Amusemi - hey amigo!   Been watching the Winter Olympics at all?  At least it
was on at a decent hour this time (not that Transylvania time at 2 am, or something like that!)  seriously, tho, thank you for those words, and your understanding.
You take good care!

Thank you again, and have a great upcoming week!
tSR

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2002-02-10 11:35 PM

It sounds almost lyrical, and is rich in imagery..would change the one of the awakes at the end, just a thought..surprised no one's mentioned that..to avoid repitition

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-10-2002 11:37 PM).]

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