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paladin
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0 posted 2002-02-10 12:44 PM


"54" Ford Victoria

My first car was great
Top down and cruising the night
First taste of freedom


Volvo 122S

No nonsense little car
Built just like a mini tank
Sort of a sports car


Olds 88

God awfull junker
Cheap and bought third hand
Wheels for the bad times


Fiat

My Italian love
Low,sleek and crayon red
Great on the corners


Pinto wagon

The price of marriage
Something to carry the kids
Domestication!


Toyota Pick ups 1&2

I love my truck
Every man should own one
It's just a male thing


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1 posted 2002-02-10 12:51 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...and they are built to last!!! (smiles) I always love the comparison tool you use in your poems, it's always a delight to see the transition of emotions in your wonderful words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-10 12:58 PM


"Every man should own a truck"

Amen!


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3 posted 2002-02-10 01:48 PM


Bob, another great write from you today!
Love the trucks myself!  Good stuff here!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2002-02-10 02:33 PM


I love the idea of a man and a truck...but for me a Volkswagon was my primary car...not my choice but I had a load of adventures in one and they have those cute little hanging straps for...going around  the curves really fast.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2002-02-10 05:47 PM


This is cute, but I'd love to see an extended poem that goes into more details about these cars in relation to the time in your life etc.

Hope ya don't mind the small small crit.
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6 posted 2002-02-10 06:07 PM


It's just a male thing to love a truck? *grins* I like this one... it's different from the poems that usually float around here!

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