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Tim
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0 posted 2002-02-10 10:31 AM


Elias, son, I fear I'm lost,
No path to lead the way,
I see not the midnight moon,
I see but light of day.

Elias will you take my hand,
To guide me through the night,
Through the shadows of the dark,
To glow of welkin's light?

Will you take your hand in mine,
As into darkness wend,
Guide me through the dark of night,
To path of journey's end?

Out amid the feral creatures,
Beside deep flowing stream,
Elias will you lead the way,
Unto the land of dream?
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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-10 10:37 AM


Tim,
Nice write enjoyed the read.

peaches73533
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2 posted 2002-02-10 10:38 AM


Tim,
Nicely done.I enjoyed this very much.
peaches

Martie
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3 posted 2002-02-10 11:31 AM


Tim--I always enjoy the twists and turns that you take in your poetry writing.  This series is very well done!  I enjoyed the read.
ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-10 11:33 AM


enjoy the adventures that Elias takes or rather we take with Elias


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5 posted 2002-02-10 11:35 AM




(sigh) Such a powerfully bittersweet narration, sweet friend, I just love the way you express yourself and can't wait to see how the journey continues! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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