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Metamorphosis
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Metamorphosis |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A transformation From love...to what is now not I cried my last tear. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm so sorry...for your loss. I still feel the wounds, myself. And pray they never return. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I like this,short and to the point. I don't see it as all painful. Isn't metamorphosis a changing or rebirth, not nessasarily an ending,but a new begining. Live like it's your last day... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of meaning within these words...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Lots of powerful meaning in these few short words.I hear you loud and clear. Peaches |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's a tear or two left for deep sweet thinkers. That's quite the title and content. Marvelous conception! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. I adore this I really do, I shan’t make the mistake of thinking it’s an expression of inner turmoil I know you are happy. And no one deserves it more darling heart. Wonderful Truly your writing is wonderful you write so well, scratch that you write brilliantly. Your clarity of expressing emotion is unique, well done darling heart truly excellent writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
It's just a place to start... Kat  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Paula, my heart cries out to your loss, I know juyst how you feel and I pray with all my heart that you will again break out of this cocoon of emptiness and embracfe love again eternally as a happy butterfly you are! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, What comes around goes around. enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
metamorphosis not an easy transition where love is involved Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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