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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-02-09 10:47 PM


What will you do?
When you dont want me around,
Will you let me go,
Or not say anything at all,

What will you do?
When you can't say goodbye,
Would you cheat on me,
Or not do anything at all,

What will you do?
When you dont want me around,
Anymore.

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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Ethan Halo
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1 posted 2002-02-09 10:48 PM


boy, can i relate to this one...
dig the rhythm on this.

"There he goes.
One of god's own prototypes.
Some mutated experiment never
considered for mass production.
Too strange to live.
Too rare to die."

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-09 10:52 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I hope now you hold true love close to your heart and now you look to a future that is bright and promising! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-09 10:56 PM


Ethan - yeah sucks dont it

mistletoe - you always have nice things to say about everyone and I love u for that

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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