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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-02-09 03:51 PM


My Desired Valentine

Be my valentine
so I can share a box
of chocolate with you.
Be my valentine
so all of my dreams
will come true.

Give me hugs and
tender caresses.
Candy hearts and
chocolate kisses.

Share with me the
coveted pleasure of
your company.

Please say you
will be mine.
For you are my
desired valentine.

JamesLee
February09
2002

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2002-02-09 03:53 PM


You got it!!!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-02-09 04:06 PM


...Sure thing James...
Please pass the chocolates?
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2002-02-09 04:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) May you and your valentine forever be evry happy together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-02-09 05:05 PM


Hello JM

Your words were as sweet as chocolate!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

strbbux
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5 posted 2002-02-10 10:31 AM


James if she doesn't say YES she is crazy, and doesn't deserve you...Oh I wish someone would write something like this for me..LOL,,very nice James.. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
6 posted 2002-02-10 10:43 AM


James,
Very well done.If she says no, then she's crazy.A valentine like this would win me over any day.Keep going.I love your writes.
Peaches

brianbeaudry
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7 posted 2002-02-10 10:48 AM


beautiful James...simply beautiful
Marsha
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8 posted 2002-02-10 10:48 AM


James darling boy absolutely first class writing, I love this and the sentiments are wonderful too. If nothing else works bribe with chocolate. Seriously, she’ll say YES this is wonderful

Utterly fabulous piece of writing You know I love it don’t you? It’s outstanding

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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