The Kiss - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #18

The Kiss

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

0 posted 2002-02-09 09:10 AM

As water falling from a cliff top,
Stirs the pool into which it does drop;
As early sunrays fall to the ground,
Releasing frost from the earth it bound;
So to the thought of your sweet soft kiss,
Its warm intent, does my cold heart dismiss.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-09 09:12 AM

Very nice Jon, short and so sweet

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

2 posted 2002-02-09 09:12 AM

very good short but gets your point across *hugs*
Tifferz

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-09 10:43 AM

Jon,

how wonderful to see you posting again...and so romantic

*sigh*

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-02-09 05:07 PM

Hello Jon

This was beautiful and I'll look forward to reading more from you.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-09 05:28 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this gorgeous poem is bound to forever melt her heart! (big huggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jonathan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-09-2002 05:28 PM).]

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

6 posted 2002-02-11 08:31 AM

Thank you Floria, Tifferz, SEA, Sue, & Noah Eaton for reading the poem and your kind comments.

Jon x

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.