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Open Poetry #18

With This Soap

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-08 11:55 PM

With This Soap

I cry behind
the bathroom door
wanting you
to leave
but stay
telling me more
hurt I feel
splashes cold to hotter
lower myself
down as I
drench in
the salty water
bathe in tears
of false hope
soothing my own
deep cuts
but can not
get clean
with this soap

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-09 12:01 PM

this leaves me speechless........

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-09 01:02 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very sad, I can feel such anxiety and sorrow behind these words, my heart goes out to you and I pray that you have found true love that has made you feel clean and has made all your dreams and joys squeaky-clean! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-02-09 07:52 AM

Oh goodness Helen...this brings tears...
I hope you are well....this is sad...

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