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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-02-08 08:18 PM

She captured him with her Mona Lisa smile

and her Fresco creamy skin

he slipped upon the grape of her beauty

drowning within her amber eyes

garnet lips kissed blue opals in his

upon the easel of seduction

lost within sweet vineyards

of her elderberry hair

a replicate masterpiece

but none can compare

in moonlight galleries of his heart

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-08-2002 08:19 PM).]

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-02-08 08:22 PM

Victoria, this is very beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Streen
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since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

2 posted 2002-02-08 08:28 PM

It was quite an 'exhibit', if you'll forgive the lame stupid pun.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-02-08 08:32 PM

This is beautiful discriptive stuff Victoria, write on!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-08 08:36 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, ooohhhhhhh...I love the idea of a moonlight gallery, your gorgeous words always inspire me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-02-08 08:46 PM

Poetry in motion...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-02-08 10:10 PM

but none can compare
in moonlight galleries of his heart

It's the careful tending to the vineyards
that makes for a fine wine.
To me that is love in the making.
You always write so nice Victoria~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-08 10:19 PM

*sigh* absolutely stunning....This poem is Magnificent...I love everything about it...your talent leaves me in awe...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-02-08 10:23 PM

Victoria - you write very well. I'm glad I didn't miss this one...

BC

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2002-02-08 11:34 PM

Lovely use of color in this!

Cor

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-09 09:42 AM

We be away next week..see you when i come back hugss

thank you newell..

streen..ha thank you streen

ecrivan...thank you very much

noah..thank you sweet one

james..glad you enjoyed

Ms serenade...thank you.. yes you are so right

karen..thank you ..you are too kind hugs

bill thank you bill

and for peeking in

Cor..thank you ..glad you enjoyed

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

11 posted 2002-02-09 06:09 PM

Victoria - Really liked the metaphors you used in this poem. Very good.

Dave

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-02-09 07:12 PM

Thank you Dave..nice to hear from you

~Victoria~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-02-09 08:09 PM

Vic...you are the Valentina of visuals and
metaphors in poetry....nicely done...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-02-09 10:01 PM

Thank you so much Barry...see you end of next week..ill be back than..

~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

15 posted 2002-02-10 12:55 PM

Victoria, please foregive the oversight! I read this, thought i replied, but apparently this was a neglection! Unforgiveable since this is one of the most charming and
well constructed heartstories you have written, IMHO, of course.

Your style is honed to a beautiful softness,
and it is an honor to witness it.

the ShadowRider
with warm wishes for a great day!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

16 posted 2002-02-10 07:05 PM

Victoria oh how I love your poems. just as luscious as vintage wine.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2002-02-10 07:27 PM

There are so many things going on here, love every bit of it.
Snda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

18 posted 2002-02-10 07:33 PM

Wonderful use of color in this piece, creating spectacular imagery! Great write.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

19 posted 2002-02-10 08:49 PM

Hello Victoria

This was absolutely stunning and told of such a timeless love and deep devotion. You write so beautifully and I enjoy everything I read of yours.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

20 posted 2002-02-10 11:18 PM

~V~

I think your words get more beautiful with each write....such a tender image here....Lovely....HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-10-2002 11:18 PM).]

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

21 posted 2002-02-11 06:37 AM

Victoria,this sounds like a beautiful piece of art.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

22 posted 2002-02-11 09:00 AM

I like this one a lot

excellent

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

23 posted 2002-02-12 05:22 PM

thank you SR...so nice of you to say..and thank you
for your support as always..

floria thank you..just got home from santa fe..hope
you have everything straightened out with you
poem..hugs

thank you sandra..and for peeking in hugs

nancy..thank you hon hugss

sue..so nice of you to say hugs

lauren..thank you so much ...and happy you enjoyed hugs

juanita..thank you very much

rex..thank you rex...and for stopping by..

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