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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-02-08 03:41 PM


Forever within my soul, mind, and heart
You have become my most precious treasure
More beloved to me than all others
Spirits entwined, journeys discovered
We have been linked beyond any measure
Though, you've been born you shall never depart

Created within my womb, a fine art
We are bound by ties never to sever
The long living flame cannot be smothered
between this sweet baby and his mother
Feelings so pure will endure forever...
Forever within my soul, mind, and heart.
Dedicated to my son, William

© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-02-08 04:06 PM


It's the most amazing love affair, isn't it?
Beautifully expressed, Bonnie!

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-02-08 04:07 PM


The bond we form with our children is both delicate and strong, there are some ties that can't ever be broken. Like I've told my son, I will always forgive you because I love you...but why oh why must they turn into teenagers?  I suppose this is where our strength comes into play.  

I enjoyed the innocent beauty in your words.

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3 posted 2002-02-08 04:35 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet frind, your gorgeous words always shine with true love and beauty! (big hugggssssss) You are a very loving friend and mother, sweet friend, may William grow to have a golden heart and share love just as you always do and delight you with many sweet memories! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-02-08 04:40 PM


Lovely...James
Suetang
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5 posted 2002-02-09 05:15 PM


Hello Bonnie

So very beautiful were your words and such a wonderful dedication to your son.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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