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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-08 11:41 AM


    

(This is for my dream girl Joanna)

Aphrodite
By: Noah Eaton
2/8/02

She rises from the sea foam
Under bird-hatching skies of Zeus in the daylight
She stands naked on a clam shell
A pearl of true love not even Botticelli could describe

She paints her eyes with lavender
She suckles the olives from willows of wine
She feels the eastern Mediterranean breeze wave her hair
Sweet darling, you will always be mine

You are my Aphrodite
You are my sweet butterfly
You are my Aphrodite
You are my goddess of a love so divine

You blow bubbles in my garden
You have shown me the path to Yeroskipos
I see your face reflected in your mirror
O' Aphrodite, the sweet laughing, sing thy fortissimo

You are my Aphrodite
You are my butterfly
You are my Aphrodite
You are my goddess of love so divine

Sweet shining Aphrodite the golden
I will take you to paradise
Through this Trojan War of my self-esteem
You have come
You have saved me…
You have seduced me in this passionate liaison
You have made my heart sparkle and gleam…

You are the whispering of sweet girls
Laced in silk and Marseille
In union of the Cupid we'll share this golden apple
My love, I'll sing to you forever...
Forever...

You are my Aphrodite
You are my butterfly
You are my Aphrodite
You are my goddess of love so divine
I will always love you...
Always love you...
You are my Aphrodite...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-08-2002 11:43 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-08 11:45 AM


Congratulations on 6000 and for the love you share so openly, so romantically, so sweetly Noah, this is beautiful.
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2 posted 2002-02-08 11:48 AM


Congratulations sweet noah.. i bet joanna has more poems written for her than any other girl she knows..how lucky she is hugss

                ~Vic


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3 posted 2002-02-08 11:50 AM


~Noah~

Wow 6000...thats a lot of writes, and replies....heres to 6000 more....

love the poem, as I am sure she will too....you have a great heart....


Lauren~

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barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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4 posted 2002-02-08 11:53 AM


Oh my goodness what a way to celebrate your milestone Noah....one wonderful lovesong straight from the heart.

Congratulations with 6000

Charisma

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5 posted 2002-02-08 12:03 PM


Wow Noah~  You are so good.
I love the soft and sensual touch
you bring to these pages.  
Your Joanna is one lucky lady!
Congrats on your 6000 did you say?
You're putting in some serious time dude.  



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6 posted 2002-02-08 12:09 PM


Congratulations on 6000, Noah...and a very beautiful poem,  as romantic as they get.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-02-08 02:40 PM


Noah, Joanna is a lucky woman, to have such love poems written for her. This is awesome.
And congratulations on 6000 posts.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-02-08 02:47 PM


Congratulations sweet Noah on 6000. Wow! And I know that Joanna will adore this one.
((Noah))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-02-08 02:48 PM


Noah, are you blushing from all the praise? You should be as this is exquisite. You certainly have a way with words and tell Joanna, if she doesn't appreciate you, I shall steal you away. Congrats on 6000 too.

Cheryl

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10 posted 2002-02-08 02:51 PM


This is the most perfect poem for your 6000th post, Noah..I love it and she will too. Congradulations

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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11 posted 2002-02-08 02:54 PM


Noah you certainly don't have any problems expressing your feelings of love...James
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12 posted 2002-02-08 03:45 PM


Noah, oh my gosh! 6000?! That's a lot of posting! Congratulations!!!!! This poem makes a beautiful 6000th post! It so romantic and tender! Bravo!

Love,
Bonnie

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13 posted 2002-02-08 04:01 PM


congratulations, sweet noah...and mythology is in the air, yes? So Joanna is aphrodite? There is a parade here in New Orleans in her honor, and it happens to be rolling tonight!

This fit right in with my state of mind this day...I love the symbolism of myth. Nice work, noah!

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14 posted 2002-02-08 04:16 PM


A unique look at the goddess herself, all of us should be so lucky.  Congratulations.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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15 posted 2002-02-08 06:48 PM


Very lovely and loving, Noah!

I'm sure she will treasure this always!

Corinne

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16 posted 2002-02-08 06:55 PM



ON YOUR 6000 POSTS!!
And a beautiful tribute to your lovely Joanna this is!!
May you have many thousands more sweetie!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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17 posted 2002-02-08 07:16 PM


This is the perfect selection for a 6000th post!!  Terrific job Noah...this will be one of my fav's!!!
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18 posted 2002-02-08 07:32 PM


CONGRATULATIONS MY FRIEND, THIS IS SO SO NICE. "Laced in silk and Marseille" Your lines are wonderful.. enjoyed this so much, You are sweet Noah.. floria

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19 posted 2002-02-08 07:34 PM


Noah, this is quite a love poem! Now, if Joanna Aphrodite doesn't love this attention, maybe Venus is standing right outside the door, waiting for the golden opportunity?
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20 posted 2002-02-08 08:15 PM


Noah, Congratulations on your 6000th post.  It's so nice to have you here at Passions.  You're always so good to each of us.   

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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21 posted 2002-02-08 08:41 PM


Noah,

    Congrats Noah dear *hugs* I'm sure you'll be at 12,000 in no time

Hugs
Tara

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22 posted 2002-02-08 09:06 PM


Noah - congratulations on the 6,000. I can't even count that high. And I'm sure she loves all these words that you write. They are really very precious...

BC

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23 posted 2002-02-08 09:16 PM


Congratulations, Noah...I'm so glad that you are you for every day you make me smile.
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24 posted 2002-02-08 10:29 PM


Noah darling boy goodness 6000 already you are a dynamo I love it. Beautiful work and wonderful writing as always. YOU are a little star. Thank you for you endless bubble of enthusiasm here.

Utterly utterly wonderful writing

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


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25 posted 2002-02-10 09:09 PM




Thank you all so much for your gorgeous comments, I love you all so so much!



Love,
Noah Eaton



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26 posted 2002-02-10 09:14 PM


hey hunny, I am so honored to be your aphrodite! You speak so highly of me, i'm almost in tears! (hugssssss)
you are very special to me, and your poems of love touch my

love,
Joanna

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