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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-02-08 08:26 AM


Enough to Make a Mornings Dew

The world continues round its core.
I cannot make the sun to store
My dragon paces in my dream
He dares me to a full extreme.

He wearies of esthetic flight
And would surcease of dreamer’s night
A trip around the maypole please
A feel a touch a little tease.

He would the sun to shine on thee
Before my eyes that I can see
Within my field of visions wheel
And steal for me a moment feel.

I would my fingers gently trace
Your face your lips your gentle space.
A fragile touch that I can steal
A moment of eternals real

A wisp of hair a prop of true
Will-o’-the wisp a drop of dew.

© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-02-08 08:29 AM


I DEW love this piece, my dear Sy... You're a wonder - How do you manage to write soooo much soooo well??...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-02-08 08:40 AM


Nan,
I just spend a little time gathering dew.

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3 posted 2002-02-08 08:48 AM



then upon the morning's dew my friend
the sun shall shine with never-end
a bit of crystal clarity
some shine for Randy's Sy, you see

let not the dragon cease his roar
but more like Puff had done before,
find sealing wax and bits of string
I hear raspberry tea is just the thing!

then find the moth who on wing
would come to hear one heart so sing
and in her poem you'll find the rhyme
if you give it plenty of time...

so in the dew drops seek the sheen
of all of your and Randy's dreams

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-02-08 08:51 AM


Sunshine,
One for you one for the poem
and one for good measure

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5 posted 2002-02-08 09:19 AM


He wearies of esthetic flight
And would surcease of dreamer’s night
A trip around the maypole please
A feel a touch a little tease.

He would the sun to shine on thee
Before my eyes that I can see
Within my field of visions wheel
And steal for me a moment feel.

I would my fingers gently trace
Your face your lips your gentle space.
A fragile touch that I can steal
A moment of eternals real
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oh my!!! ... my my my ...
OH Sy!!! ... sigh sigh sigh.
Me thinks its not the tea making me high,
this puts more than winkies in my eye!!

You wrap me in your rhymes and such,
You touch me with your "touchless touch".
(never doubt, it means so much)

*winkiewinkie*

*smiling at you Stinky*       
*you too sunshine*
*you too Randy*     

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-02-08 10:04 AM


JM,
Then I'll touch you with a touchless touch.
And make of it the such of much.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

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7 posted 2002-02-08 10:27 AM


enjoy
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-02-08 10:31 AM


Vandana,
Thanks.

Ariana
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9 posted 2002-02-08 10:34 AM


Sy

You romantic you - I love it!

"I would my fingers gently trace
Your face your lips your gentle space.
A fragile touch that I can steal
A moment of eternals real"

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-02-08 11:31 AM


Ariana,
Yes I am, thank you.

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-02-08 12:04 PM


A lovely, romantic poem, Sy.

Hi Randy!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2002-02-08 01:21 PM


ohhhh I love Mornings Dew....and I do love your romantic piece.*sigh*....love it...as always

Charisma

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13 posted 2002-02-08 02:27 PM


Dew you know how cool this is? I want some warm sunshine, but I do love the dew too.
Martie
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14 posted 2002-02-08 02:37 PM


Hey Sy..
what a guy
dew for two
sounds like my
cup of brew

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-02-08 02:52 PM


Madame C,
from Randy and I.

Charisma,
My thanks go with a

Midnitesun,
How about a to warm up the dew.

Martie,
I'll drink to that.

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16 posted 2002-02-08 05:27 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet frind, your gorgeous words always make me sigh and smile! (big hugggssssss) May your heart forever be touched by the beauty of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-02-08 10:42 PM


Noah,
Thank you and glad you enjoyed.

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18 posted 2002-02-09 09:07 AM


Seymour I could copy and paste your whole poem here to make a point, but I will just say, it is entirely wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2002-02-09 09:27 AM


Floria,
All I could give you back for that sweet is a

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