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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-02-08 05:29 AM


me make the dark songs
become whispers
when we dance
under tree people eyes

you hurt me with pleasure
I pay you back
til you want to stop
for moments

we are bad thoughts
with dancing shoes
and an open stage
of applauding sounds

we are break glasses noise
with our wet skin
crashing into hollow wants
with hard hand worship

you pray for my forgiveness
for wanting to sleep
I pray for the sin
of happiness

to a jealous god..

©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-08-2002 05:41 AM).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-02-08 05:37 AM


Master Dark,
your roots go deep in this write...and you have touched my core.
write on
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2002-02-08 07:21 AM


Kethry

most humble thanks my dear
for your eyes and soul

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2002-02-08 09:31 AM


now that is what I call dancing......
*whew* you sure can warm a morning right up!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2002-02-08 10:52 AM


SEA,,,,,,please wear the warmth
as a humble gift
and perhaps
model it for me

thank  you

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