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Fee
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0 posted 2002-02-07 10:10 PM


Do you realy know
what your words do to me
you speak of love lost
and of hope and harmony

You speak of love found
and passions of the heart
you shed a little light
when things seem a little dark

You have given me a place
where comfort can be found
where thoughts and emotions
can be expressed out loud

Thank you for such a gift
that each of you share
for showing me a friendship
that is special and rare

Sometimes I do not reply as often as I should, I read so much of the poetry here and I believe you all have helped me in one way or another to get through the little trials in life.

HUGS TO YOU ALL

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2002-02-07 10:13 PM


This is a lovely tribute, Fee. I like it here too.

sky


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2 posted 2002-02-07 10:14 PM


And you are most welcome...I think we all
feel this here...

brianbeaudry
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3 posted 2002-02-07 10:15 PM


I dito skyshine Fee, I believe we all are enriched by the talent and compassion of the poets and friends here.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-02-07 10:20 PM


This is lovely Fiona.  I know some days I read for hours on end...and don't bother to even pick up the pen myself.  Passions is a wonderful place full of great freindship.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-02-07 10:37 PM



This is how to thank all...by writing poetry that extends back what was given...

well done!

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6 posted 2002-02-07 10:42 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sooooo inspirational and we are so overwhelmed with joy to inspire you with what we write! This is a gorgeous piece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!



Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-07-2002 10:46 PM).]

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-02-08 12:05 PM


Hello Fee

I could almost feel the warmth radiating from your lovely words.  I am sure I speak for many in saying that your words have also touched many of us.  I feel also that I don't always find the time to read and comment as much as I wish but I try my best.
I hope things are fine with you.

Take care......sue

Suetang

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with you
8 posted 2002-02-08 12:10 PM


awww, this is SO wonderful... your poetry is always awesome
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9 posted 2002-02-08 12:11 PM


Fiona, this was so gentle and kind. I  have to say, you spoke my heartsong with this one. Thank you. This home really is full of Love and Understanding and Compassion. And you always reply honestly and gently whenever you reply, which means a lot to me.
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2002-02-08 12:24 PM


Yes, the written words overwhelm me at times and yet I fail to convey how they move me.
I've laughed out loud when reading a particular poem only to read the next and wipe my tears away.  Poetry is a rare gift that touches the heart, often times without knowing it has touched at all.

So I'll seize the moment and thank you all and thank you Fee for saying what I so often feel.


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11 posted 2002-02-08 12:34 PM


Wonderfully done, and as a dedication like this should be first to our leader, Ron, and then us, for without him where would we be?  I wish I had written this but I am sure glad you did!

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-02-08 01:05 AM


Well written...James
Larry C
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13 posted 2002-02-08 01:34 AM


Fee,
I make a sad confession. This is your first poem that I have read. How totally wonderful that you would do this. I concur with your sentiments and am glad you have found support here. I'll see if I can't join that list.

Fee
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14 posted 2002-02-08 02:19 AM


Wow, again you have all touched my heart. Thank you for your kind words - the exact type that I had been refering to.

Larry, I am glad you liked and you will most certainly be included in my heart.

Hugs again.

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
15 posted 2002-02-08 05:42 AM


Fee,
beautifully expressed.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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