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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-07 09:39 PM


STARDUST
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/10/01

Stardust
Fills your eyes
Cascades of heaven gush
Down your soft cheeks they slide

Stardust
Blankets me in the evening
Your warm breath and moans of love
Laves me as I hold you close, dreaming

Stardust
Frocks me when you are near
Lifting you and I up
Heavenbound from doubt and fear

Stardust
Complements from the cupids
Thank you for giving me true love
At lifes fountains we shall forever together sip...
Of love as golden as starlight...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-09-2002 11:45 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-07 10:06 PM


Beautiful starshiny poem, Noah!
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2 posted 2002-02-07 10:11 PM


Beautiful as always sweet Noah!
Enjoyed this tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2002-02-07 10:14 PM


A Sweet candy poem
filled with stardust and moonglow
a pleasure to read

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4 posted 2002-02-07 11:11 PM


This reminds me of Tinkerbell splashing dust all around and I know even she would be twitterpated after reading this one.  Awesome work Noah!!!

Kat

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5 posted 2002-02-07 11:44 PM


lovely dear noah..hugss

check out those soft cheeks again

               ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-02-09 05:48 PM


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7 posted 2002-02-09 05:52 PM


Oohh, very nice, Noah, especially liked your last verse. Dreamy. Cheryl
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8 posted 2002-02-09 05:57 PM


Noah - Truly a fine romantic write.  Nicely done.  

Dave

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9 posted 2002-02-09 10:43 PM


Noah - another gem from you...

BC

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10 posted 2002-02-10 10:26 AM


Stardust, oh how I love stardust, lovely Noah,   floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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11 posted 2002-02-10 10:56 AM


Noah,
I loved the Stardust and the moon.Your writes always make me swoon.
Peaches

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12 posted 2002-02-10 11:13 AM


A beutiful poem about one of my favorite themes. Thank you, sweet Noah.
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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13 posted 2002-02-10 11:19 AM


Poem of sweet delight
from the stardust in your eyes
makes magic the night

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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14 posted 2002-02-10 11:13 PM


"At lifes fountains we shall forever together sip...
Of love as golden as starlight"...

This was gorgeous baby!! I enjoyed it


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15 posted 2002-02-10 11:35 PM


Oh, Noah, this is so beautiful, but everything you write is wonderful! You have such a way with words! Loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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16 posted 2002-02-11 06:33 AM


Noah,wonderfully sweet!

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