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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-07 08:11 PM

Was fate, destiny, or just chance?
Did the earth spin to align souls?
Has the moon shined in both a glance?
Can love, true love be bound to hold.

I walk this path in dark, not light.
The clutch of fog chilling my bones.
Shivers swarm over me in fright
as time takes sadly somber tones.

When the dark of day replaces light
and the moon of night shines pure
Love does fleetingly take to flight
as two hearts once again beat sure.

For night does then give rise to stars
and stars give the heavens to earth.
As all things are once born to Mars
and true love again does give birth.

Birth brings the shimmer in soft eyes
as dawn again covers the moon.
While softest caress brings soft sighs
from hearts that under a moon swoon.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-07 08:15 PM

"Birth brings the shimmer in soft eyes
as dawn again covers the moon.
While softest caress brings soft sighs
from hearts that under a moon swoon."

beautiful images form in my mind
but this flows like a song! Lovely

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-07 08:17 PM

Barry - beautiful images here when I read this...

BC

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-07 08:20 PM

"Birth brings the shimmer in soft eyes
as dawn again covers the moon.
While softest caress brings soft sighs
from hearts that under a moon swoon."

My favorite verse, I see that others like it too, very nice Magnus, very well written.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-07 10:19 PM

Sue...thank you very much for your warm
and always wonderful words...

Bill...thanks much as always...

Floria..Happy that another post has pleased
you...thanx...

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2002-02-07 11:32 PM

Sentimental this makes me.
Just plain sentimental.

Beautiful write Mangus.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-08 12:02 PM

Hello Barry

Once again you have graced us with your magical words of love and romance.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-02-08 12:03 PM

Very beautiful and romantic...as usual, Barry. For some reason, the moon is usually associated with romance.
You did this very well, indeed!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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