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Music of Sunrise
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Music of Sunrise |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Music of Sunrise There’s not a waking second more A mystery dream still in waking hours Anyway There’s warmth under the covers Reticent to remain outside looking in don’t want to read my own autobiography Bent flower in a vase, will it recover? Even plants have sweat stains Nothing is ever easy No, not that one! that hat is too sad to wear those garments too bland those shoes too sole-thin Rolling arpeggio of piano crescendos No holding back the rhythm nods Learning to appreciate the precision hearing the note by note progression knowing how it will all end still it is mesmerizing, captivating, alluring the music of sunrise |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous imagery your words create, this was sweet music to my ears! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
....this is so beautiful, I liked the ending best....all comes together so nice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
PearlsB4Swine - the music of sunrise is so mesmerizing. Nice write... BC |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I was lost in the under the covers part!! I hate getting out of bed in the a.m., even if it is for the beauty of sunrise... Kat |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your poem is as beautiful as a sunrise, PB4S. I love sunrises but am too lazy to get up to see them in the morning. Great job!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Noah: Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed this. Sea: Thank you! Mornings are splendid aren't they? Bill: Yes, it can be very mesmerizing to watch a new day come to life, thank you! amusemi: Sometimes I find it hard to get out from under those covers too, far too comfortable there that time of day. Thank you! Madame Chipmunk: You should try it once, you will never be the same. Sunsets are wonderful, but can't begin to compare to sunrise! Thanks! PB4S |
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