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Fee
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-07 07:17 PM


I woke up this morning
and to my suprise
there was something missing
I could see it in my eyes

Looking in the mirror
something was not right
maybee just a shadow
cast from the bedroom light

I shrug and get moving
into the pattern of the day
when another passing mirror
reflects me back again

The image that is there
is not one I know
my eyes are a little darker
they seem to have lost their glow

Looking a little harder
staring into my own eyes
Its here I found I am trying
to put on a disguise

How can I face myself
when I can not face you
for knowing we cant be together
has broken me in two

Its taken the shine from my eyes
and cast a shadow dark
for eyes are the windows
looking straight into my heart

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-02-07 07:56 PM


Fee - eyes are the window to the heart and to the soul. Sad write, hope you are well...

BC

akela
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2 posted 2002-02-07 07:56 PM


to have loved and lost is better than never to have loved
Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-02-07 08:02 PM


Very Nice job of conveying your sense of loss in this poem.  ***Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-02-07 09:12 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your loss and I pray that soon new love will grace your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20
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Northern Ontario Canada
5 posted 2002-02-07 09:48 PM


very touching poem...great truth penned...we may fool others but we cannot hide from ourselves!!!Don't you wish mirrors had never been invented, then we might have been able to kid ourselves!!!
Fee
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Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2002-02-07 09:52 PM


Thank you all for your loving words.

I feel I have lost yes, but I know that I am loved. It is a situation that can not go beyond where it is, even when both our hearts agree that we are soul mates and should be together.

As the saying goes, another time, another place, but in each others hearts we will remain.

Your kind words help so much.... Thank you again.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2002-02-07 09:55 PM


oooooooo
I know this....
so sad
and so well written

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-02-07 10:16 PM


Oh Fiona, I know where you are coming from with this write.  This hurts, but, time will heal.  Good write.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2002-02-08 12:09 PM


Hello Fee

This was an outstanding piece of writing and I have no doubt that the sparkle will return very soon.  Your loving heart is always expressed through your written words.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Larry C
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10 posted 2002-02-08 01:59 AM


Fee,
Man...another poet I have to add to my reading list. How will I ever manage. Too many good poets in one place! I love this.

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