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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-07 10:37 AM



the eyes of passion
staring into our being
loose inhibitions

Inspired by:Midnight Land

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-07 10:41 AM



magnetic moments
when one finds a star so bright
tribulation's light

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2 posted 2002-02-07 10:43 AM


Sunshine ~
what tribulation
inhibitions are long gone
only love remains

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-02-07 10:48 AM




the kiss of passion
ignites the candle of love
dancing in the dark

     ~Victoria~

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4 posted 2002-02-07 10:54 AM



no ties that bind us
yet in passion we are bound
souls melt together

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5 posted 2002-02-07 10:54 AM


Victoria ~
candelight caress
passion's dance is evolving
begun with a kiss


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-07-2002 10:55 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-02-07 10:57 AM


SEA~
welcome bindery
bound by passion's hot demands
by choice we unite

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-02-07 10:58 AM


passion takes control
as true love becomes desire
eyes are set aflame

*giggling* well I am trying..these senryu are not easy...you are so good at them...**big hugs**  


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-07-2002 10:58 AM).]

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8 posted 2002-02-07 11:02 AM


Startime ~

desires are aflame
eyes limpid pools in the heat
I would drown in them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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9 posted 2002-02-07 11:10 AM


lost within your eyes
my heart pulses with it's need
melt in your embrace

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-02-07 11:11 AM


eyes whisper passion
let love bind without bondage
we shall remain one

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11 posted 2002-02-07 11:16 AM


Skipped heartbeats play
Gorgeous caramel ripples
Reflecting loves eyes



(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always soooo delightful to read! We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you always find heaven in her eyes! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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12 posted 2002-02-07 11:18 AM


Startime ~
our needs not sated
passion demands responses
embracing once more

SEA ~

bound to the moment
passion is love's explosion
one, yet two in love


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-07-2002 11:19 AM).]

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13 posted 2002-02-07 11:26 AM


Interloper,I don`t know how to reply like everyone else.Just know that I enjoyed it.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
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14 posted 2002-02-07 11:27 AM


firm lips drink deeply
twin flames dance upon the heart
kindle inner fire

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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15 posted 2002-02-07 11:32 AM


North Carolina Girl ~
Just write from your heart ... like you did.  
I cherish your kind comment

Startime ~
hungrily we kiss
each kiss stoking fires inside
passion has control

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-02-07 11:35 AM


Once in passion
pure display of emotions
why resist submission?

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17 posted 2002-02-07 11:36 AM



no trial in this light
only future's promise bright
stardust memories

Startime
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18 posted 2002-02-07 11:49 AM


need consumes our flesh
to desire we surrender
we unite twin flames

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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19 posted 2002-02-07 11:52 AM


festoons of fire
wreathe us in heavenly love
scarfed in passions flame



YAY!!! Love it!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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20 posted 2002-02-07 04:41 PM


Just a tender kiss
and heat within sexy eyes
inhibitions gone

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21 posted 2002-02-07 04:54 PM


You guys have overwhelmed me
What wonderful and talented people you are!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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22 posted 2002-02-07 05:19 PM


seeing the full truth
unashamed now for all view
naked in your love

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-07-2002 05:23 PM).]

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23 posted 2002-02-07 05:23 PM


1slick_lady ~
beautifully clothed
our love is never naked
knowing each other

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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24 posted 2002-02-07 05:43 PM


Eyes can say so much
When words will not do justice
Eyes connect, hearts touch

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25 posted 2002-02-07 05:46 PM


Lovely thoughts here, I enjoyed this....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Deep in the heart
26 posted 2002-02-07 05:56 PM


Greeneyes ~
Thank you for the kind comment and the time you took to read my work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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27 posted 2002-02-07 07:18 PM


             Love is sweet as wine
               Poured into a crystal glass
             Awaiting your lips

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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28 posted 2002-02-07 08:15 PM


Brilliant Writing!!!!!!! ***Ivy Rose
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29 posted 2002-02-07 08:18 PM


enjoy
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