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To Touch.................
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To Touch................. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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To touch that which is inside you move your heart to feel a breath of believing my persuasion could heal In my eyes I’ll take you where your soul can confide whisper wordless needs till they all subside Erasing ache scribblings written deep in stone through my eyes you’ll see you were never alone To touch that which is inside you neither to change nor persuade leaving only love that will forever pervade ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
IWIHWT... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous touching words of love always shine and permeates these pages! (kiss on cheek) May he forever touch your heart and have it glowing happily in love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
SEA: Enjoyed - very nicely done. "To touch that which is inside you neither to change nor persuade leaving only love that will forever pervade" You have captured love and its true meaning. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your soul touches mine like water on rock wearing yielding yet forceful my heart feels your touch softly melting into yours ... now one Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a breath of believing my persuasion could heal ==================================== whisper wordless needs till they all subside Erasing ache scribblings written deep in stone through my eyes you'll see you were never alone To touch that which is inside you neither to change nor persuade leaving only love that will forever pervade =================================== *sigh*  OH YES .... yes -- yes ... I too WIHWT. *library* You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
To touch that which is inside you move your heart to feel a breath of believing my persuasion could heal Lovely when one can touch deep in your heart and soul..enjoyed Sea  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I smiled |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jan picked my favorite lines (go figure, eh?) This is a beauty, and love is in the air! Do I detect an early spring? (Doncha just LOVE Passions in the spring?) Okay, I'll quit babbling--sigh...somebody rewind me to last night! Loved this, Sue! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* filled with deep passion to give the best of love that burns within your heart...Magnificent. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Touch is a powerful thing, it is a tangible feeling that speaks without words. In my book, it's the soft spoken language of love. You've a wonderful way of expressing yourself dear SEA~ |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This begs the question, "Do we touch only with our hands?" Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Touched - Indeed... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
To touch that which is inside you neither to change nor persuade leaving only love that will forever pervade Been a long time since I said this but, damn, do I wish I'd written that! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you used your words to paint this scene, Sue.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is so pretty, Susan. I'm "touched" and I'm keeping it. (((hugs)))me Michael Auguste~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, What can I say? Superb. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am a guy...guys don't usually sigh...I am sighing....awesome... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Leaving only love" that says is all, very beautiful Sea, floria Floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - another excellent write... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Splendid.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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