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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-02-07 04:29 AM



Eros Bound
~*Marge Tindal*~

Flight of wing
          Eros bound
           taking hearts
                in surround

                 Holding on
          not letting go
  hearts are drawn
in cupid's bow

Friends in making
     No love untold
          held in arms
              tender fold

                This I am
    soft-hearted friend
  Holding love tender
until the end


Aiming for the heart~
From a long-time-ago challenge~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-07-2002 04:40 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-02-07 07:09 AM


Marge,
this got me right through the heart and made me think all in one.
Write om
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-02-07 07:12 AM


A beautifully written poem, Marge. Thanks for sharing.
-newell

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3 posted 2002-02-07 07:21 AM


Indeed you are, m'lady... and I'm smilin' for you...
Dee
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4 posted 2002-02-07 07:53 AM


I am sure your arrow hit its mark, Marge.

Dee

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5 posted 2002-02-07 07:57 AM


Marg, you have a way with a bow and arrow...
Straight for the heart  

A loving, passionate touch.

Maggie


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6 posted 2002-02-07 08:56 AM


Ah Marge...This is wonderful!  I don't care if it is a repost, I never saw it before and it's great!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-02-07 09:18 AM


straight to the target it has reached, i guess, it's beautiful, Marge....
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8 posted 2002-02-07 11:12 AM


Straight from the heart and straight to the heart.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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9 posted 2002-02-07 11:21 AM


Always!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2002-02-07 01:10 PM


Marge:  This one will surely reap a lot of Valentines!

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2002-02-07 05:14 PM



A Valentine's blessing, to be sure!

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12 posted 2002-02-07 05:54 PM


Bullseye. Well done Marge.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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13 posted 2002-02-07 07:09 PM


Hmmmmm looks familiar Marge, LOL, enjoyed reading this today. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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14 posted 2002-02-07 07:11 PM


Very lovely Marge~


HUGS

Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-07-2002 07:11 PM).]

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15 posted 2002-02-07 10:52 PM


This is so sweet, Marge. I like the way you did this.
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-02-24 09:53 PM



Thanks everyone ... this one got by me without responding to your lovely replies~
I apologize .... been busy in this 'big love' ... sometimes a gal just loses her train of thought ...~

This WAS a fun piece to do ... but a wench to format and get it to line up correctly ... had to post it blindly as it didn't want to give me a preview~
Glad to know it was enjoyed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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