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Cinders Of Remember
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Cinders Of Remember ~*Marge Tindal*~ When foreverly speaks your name I'm held suspended in the fire Sparking with flames of burning desire Loving you once again~ Sparks in rise from ashen embers Flaming into sweet remember When touched by whispered winds Of loving you once again~ The cinders of remember were waiting to be fanned Breezed into a consuming fire Ah, yes ... loving you once again~ ~For my special fella February 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just a slight breeze - that's all they needed to burn brightly again...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Make sure he gets to read it but before he does I'll sneak in a  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, I'm sure he will love this one! I know I do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,beautifully romantic it sure sounds like love.   Juanita |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Whooooo.....Amigo prays to the Wind God...send it all to the Sunshine State of Florida...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Loverly  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you have to know I love this yes, this is so perfect I love it when you foreverly |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one leaves me with such a smile... for the poetic beauty... and even more for the flame that now burns foreverly from those old coals. *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nothing like fanning the flames all over again! This is wonderfully warm and cozy~ and toasty too! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thank you all SO much~ I'm off and running in a few short little whiles ... hope to have computer access .. but if I don't .... know I think of you all~ Much love and appreciation to each of you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Sometimes dreams do come true and we get a second chance at love! Glad it's happening for you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your love for him consumes you is such a passionate way...I love it!!! I LOVE IT!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful and passionate, Marge...I'm sure that your special fello will love this.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Marge. I know your fella with like it. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Love this poem *S* Passionate...warm....hummmm I am dazed by the blaze Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
The cinders of remember were waiting to be fanned Breezed into a consuming fire Ah, yes ... loving you once again~ ================================== ah yes....  love is an uplifting thing eh! very nice margie.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Just beautiful and oh I love the title. great poem Marge, floriaFloria |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, your work always touches me in some way. This is so tender and beautiful. I love it. I have been trying to send you an email but keep getting them back again. Can you e me please? Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm foreverly thinking your name when I think of clever and unique poetry! Fan those cinders of remember into the fire and write write write the passion....Hey baby! I'll read it everytime! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
toasting the heat of memory well done ms m |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
This is so sweet Marge, I don't think the flames need much fanning LOL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I love it when you write of 'foreverly'. Smiling with you, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the way you use language. Wonderful poem. Nan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Me too~  StarTime~ Thanks so much, gal~ Lyra~ Thank you~ I think he's kinda special~ SmartChick~ Hugs, gal~ Thanks bunches~ Dan~ Thanks ever so much~ DG~ Yeahhhhhh ! Thank you sweetie~ Floria~ Awwwww .. I appreciate that~ Dee~ What a lovely reply ... thanks hon~ I hope my ISP gets the e-mail thingie straightened out~ ETHome~ Hey you !!!! Thanks bookoodles~ DarkStranger~ Awwww, I appreciate the reply~ BrianB~ Ahhhhh ... thanks so much~ Vicky~ *Hugs* to you gal~ I'm foreverly in this BIG LOVE~ Pilgrimage~ Thank you for such a lovely compliment~ *You are ALL the greatest ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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