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jennirey
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0 posted 2002-02-06 11:54 PM


We spent the day together,
laughing and holding hands.
Enjoying each others company.
as it shall be till the end.
The snow started falling upon us,
Big fluffy flakes from the sky.
I looked out side and was mesemerized
to see them floating by.
You laughed in utter amuzement.
to see the kid in me.
The gleam in my eyes
as the flakes fell from the sky.
I was practically dancing with glee.
Your face beamed in delight,
as mine was frozen in time.
As the big fluffy flakes
leisurely
fell from the sky.

02/2002


© Copyright 2002 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-07 12:16 PM


This is absolutely gorgeous!!!  It gave me goosebumps!!  Really great write!!!
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2 posted 2002-02-07 03:32 AM


Jennirey~
Welcome to Passions~

This is delightful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-02-07 08:44 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is so romantic and so beautiful, I cried reading this to feel such rapture and happiness flow from your heart in love! (kiss on cheek) May the child in you always sing like an angel forever and ever like this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-02-07 08:50 AM


Jennirey,
Lovely write, enjoyed the read.

Archiveghost
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5 posted 2002-02-09 05:50 PM


B U M P
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6 posted 2002-02-09 06:46 PM


Enjoyed this...James
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7 posted 2002-02-09 06:49 PM


Much enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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