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Greeneyes
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0 posted 2002-02-06 11:52 PM



Go to sleep
Go to sleep little
Angel Alacia
Go to sleep
Go to sleep
Little angel of mine
Close your eyes
Close your eyes
Little angel of mine
Close you eyes go sleep
Little angel of mine

With a kiss on the cheek
I lay thee down
I’ve tucked you in
With out a sound
A prayer I say each
And every night
That you will soundly sleep
With angels in sight


With Love,

Mom’ma


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart


©  2/5/2002

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-08-2002 12:39 PM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-02-06 11:54 PM


Lauren,
Perfect...I think I hear it faintly now. Such gentleness from a wonderful mom!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-06-2002 11:55 PM).]

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-02-07 12:12 PM


Greeneyes - you are a most wonderful mom to write a poem like this about the little one.

BC

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3 posted 2002-02-07 12:33 PM


A beautiful lullaby for your daughter, Lauren...how lucky she is to have a talented and loving mom like you.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-02-07 03:34 AM


GreenEyes~
I believe that a child never forgets the lullaby's mommy sings~
This is a lovely gift for your wee one~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-02-07 08:36 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo heavenly, sweet friend, I cried reading this to feel the love of such a gorgeous mother like you for her sweet child! (kiss on cheek) We all love you both so much, may the angels always guide her forever and ever and sing to her heart like a music box! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-07 09:02 AM


what a beautiful heart you have, Lauren,

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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7 posted 2002-02-07 09:08 AM


Greeneyes,
Just lovely.

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8 posted 2002-02-07 09:42 AM


Lauren,

Such a lovely lullaby for your little precious one.   Nice going, mom.   *hugs*

Michael

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9 posted 2002-02-07 10:49 PM


What a comforting and gentle lullaby for your daughter. It was beautiful. Do you read/sing it to her every night? It's a very sweet idea.

sky

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10 posted 2002-02-08 12:07 PM


Lauren, that is so tender and loving! I could almost hear your whisper-song.
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11 posted 2002-02-08 03:01 PM


Another Beauty Lauren,  thank you...
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12 posted 2002-02-08 04:21 PM


Lullabies are always, no matter what the age.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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13 posted 2002-02-09 01:00 AM



So beautiful...but sad... so very sad..

well done, Lady.

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14 posted 2002-02-09 01:11 AM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
*this "Appallingly Cute Coo Moment" brought to you by Dave, and Z-Mass PM, Increase your testosterone while you sleep!!*

hehehe
this is really sweet, lauren.
even makes the manly men among us go "awwwww."
good job!
-Dave

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15 posted 2002-02-09 02:36 AM


wonderful!  i have a lullaby in here somewhere for my little baby girl too...   how fun it is to be able to sing them their own special song....

she will treasure this i'm sure..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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16 posted 2002-02-09 03:01 PM


hey you guys thank you...I have been singing this to her since she was born, I have one for tyler alexa as well....that I have framed and placed on my wall....I know the girls will appreciate this, and hopefully sing it to their children many years from now....Bless you all and thanks for enjoying my song.... 's


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-09-2002 03:03 PM).]

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