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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-02-06 11:34 PM


That Moment
By Larry Chadwick

I saw that look in your eyes,
And I know what it means.
I’ve seen that look before,
When I was in my teens.

I felt that touch on my leg,
It was more than a tease.
I’ve felt that touch before,
And I know where it leads.

I sense the beat of your heart,
A race that I recognize.
I’m waiting for your lips,
This love finally realized!

February 6, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-06 11:39 PM


Larry~

WOW my friend, you just took me back to many a day gone by....lovely thoughts here.....dont ya just love going back?     

LC~  


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-06-2002 11:39 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-02-06 11:50 PM


Lauren,
See...without getting older, how would we get all these great memories? lol Thanks...you too huh?

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3 posted 2002-02-07 08:56 AM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such rapture and love fills tehse gorgeous words from your loving heart! I still yearn to be touched by my true love, but I believe it can happen always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-07 09:40 AM


Larry,are you saying been there done that?I really liked this.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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5 posted 2002-02-07 09:59 AM


Larry, this is making me smile big smiles
this is wonderful

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6 posted 2002-02-07 10:20 AM


Larry--Nothing quite like that sweet anticipation.  You described it well!
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7 posted 2002-02-07 11:37 AM


The anticipation of love and the pounding
of ones heart is an exciting time indeed.
You've captured the feeling
and stirred some sweet memories.

Nice one Larry~  

  

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8 posted 2002-02-07 02:29 PM


I really liked this one, Larry...it reminds me of my feelings for David/

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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9 posted 2002-02-07 03:15 PM


*giggling* I am still waiting for this kind of feeling...When it comes, thanks to you, I will know what it is....Amazing how moments can mean so much..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-02-07 03:18 PM


Larry
What a moment indeed.Brought back some memories.Very nice!

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11 posted 2002-02-07 03:20 PM


Had to take a deep breath with this one, Larry!
Larry C
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12 posted 2002-02-07 11:58 PM


Noah,
It will...it will! Thanks.

Juanita,
Maybe...and I wanna do it again! Thanks.

SEA,
Oh good... Thanks.

Martie,
Ain't that the truth. Thanks.

BluesSerenade,
I knew it. Love those memories!


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13 posted 2002-02-08 12:00 PM


Lyra,
Well...enough said! Thanks.

Karen,
Like you didn't know. I don't believe you. Thanks.

sodpossum,
The best of memories for sure. Thanks.

Duncan,
Some memories are more stunning then others! Thanks.

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