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Skyfire
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0 posted 2002-02-06 08:53 PM


Don't leave...
  I beg of you
I can't lose you...
  I love you too much
What's wrong...
  Please talk to me
You seem to be pulling away...
  Just please...
     Don't do this...

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-06 09:23 PM


Hard to improve on an emotion so honestly expressed.  You have taken a moment and captured the pain perfectly.
Please don't do this...says it all!

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2 posted 2002-02-06 09:26 PM


Very sad and beautifully written.

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-02-06 09:26 PM



To the point!

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4 posted 2002-02-06 09:36 PM


You could not have said these feelings better
if you had written it ten different ways..

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5 posted 2002-02-06 09:43 PM


Skyfire - Your pain I can feel, it came through clear in this sad write. Wish you the best...

BC

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