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Moonlight Romeo
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0 posted 2002-02-06 06:47 PM


Let me play you our song for the first time dear one,
A song that will speak to the stars and rival the sun.
A song that comes from love and from life’s muse
Full of the rhythms of the soul and love’s many hues.

Sit back and listen as the song begins to play
It’s a song that will never sound the same, day after day.
It’s a song that will lift you up when days are new
And a song that will comfort you when days are blue.

This is the song of my heart, my love, my own.
Whose harmonies will grow with love that’s shown.
It’s a song that will begin when our hearts become one.
From a heart that forever thanks you for all that you’ve done.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2002 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-06 06:51 PM


Wonderful words of devotion......liked this one much!!!!
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2 posted 2002-02-06 06:55 PM


Mmmm...the flavor of your song is wonderful, I am sure, Dear. You have been busy today and I love that because I get to read your wonderful work and be inspired by it.

May I just tell you that you have inspired a line for a poem..."Our song, though not yet written, becomes a breath of thought that begs for a future"

Or other varied ways of that. Loving this, Dear Romeo.

Absolutely loving it.

I am many.

Moonlight Romeo
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3 posted 2002-02-06 06:59 PM


Brian Beaudry, thank you for your words.  Yes, they do speak of devotion.

Dear Siofra, thank you for loving this, and for being inspired by it.  It's always wonderful for me when I can do that.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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4 posted 2002-02-06 07:17 PM


Indeed you do, Sir...
you more than inspire me.

I am many.

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5 posted 2002-02-06 07:24 PM




Awwwwwwww, you're sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know that your love is always going to love you and together you will sing this love song forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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