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quietwaters
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since 2002-02-04

Posts 30
delray beach, florida

0 posted 2002-02-06 04:35 PM

thoughts
shaping torrents
in my mind
to the music of
implacable confusion

finding
release in the soothing
caress of wind
on my skin

movement
arrested by movement
as it were

the future
held in abeyance
by the momentary joy
of
being
and sitting still

living
for the sometime
wind....

© Copyright 2002 Ree Joy Baldonado - All Rights Reserved

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-06 04:44 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always are filled with such serenity and rejuvenation, may we all rejuvenate and embrace the wind with a smile and sail, holding all our dreams close! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ray, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you

2 posted 2002-02-06 04:49 PM

"thoughts
shaping torrents
in my mind
to the music of
implacable confusion"

I love the way you write

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-02-06 04:51 PM

You continue to impress...you have managed to capture that peaceful moment of "at one"--which I always thought had to be wordless.

I was wrong.

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-07 10:14 AM

Wonderful write. I loved the imagery!
Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-07 11:59 AM

Very, very nice!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-02-07 07:04 PM

You have a fan, this poem is stirring. I love what you did with the feeling of the wind and confusion, by the way, I'm a tornado

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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PearlsB4Swine
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since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

7 posted 2002-02-07 07:16 PM

It is wonderful to be able to find simple comforts in even a subtle breeze. Nicely worded.

PB4S

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