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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-06 03:09 PM


Where Tears Keep Flowing
By: Noah Eaton
2/6/02

When I wake up from a dream
I embrace the sunlight
I pray to the lord above
To bring a sparkle to my eyes

A true love
I yearn to hold to my heart
That I could nurture like a mother
And never fall apart

Because there is a hole
Deep inside of me
Finally I have found something
That can make me complete

So reach me, my love
Have faith in me
Reach me, my love
I've tossed and turned in my sleep

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed

I say my prayers
Before I go to bed
Wishing to hold you close forever
And someday be wed

When I cry
I always think of you
To reassure myself
To keep myself from feeling blue

I would sacrifice anything
Just to hear you laugh
You are my Guinevere
You fill me with rapture at last

So reach me, my love
Have faith in me
Reach me, my love
I've tossed and turned in my sleep

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed

All this time these tears I cry
They keep flowing, in all this time
All this time I wonder why
Can I make you mine?
All this time I've searched for sunshine
You are all I want, you are so divine

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed
Can you reach me, darling
To where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Before I fall into the ashes of broken dreams…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2002 03:09 PM).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-06 03:29 PM


darlin, don't cry anymore! Your true love will make her way into your life very soon.
heres a big ((((HUUUUGGGGGGG))

strbbux
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2 posted 2002-02-06 03:49 PM


Oh Noah, how bittersweet this was.
"When I cry
I always think of you
To reassure myself
To keep myself from feeling blue"

How sweet your words are, I hope you find your true love soon. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-02-06 04:00 PM


Noah, this is so sad....hope  you are not shedding these tears!

Kathleen--(Kay)
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Laurie Lee



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4 posted 2002-02-06 06:10 PM


hey!!! noah the poem sounds so sad :'(  *pokes ya on the tip of ur nose he he he smile button dont cry no more *HUGS*
Tifferz

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5 posted 2002-02-06 06:42 PM


Noah, this is very touching, keep on writing my friend.

"All this time these tears I cry
They keep flowing, in all this time
All this time I wonder why"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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6 posted 2002-02-06 07:04 PM


Oh Noah, I know how it feels. But we have to know that someday they will reach us.
Beautiful words.
Sandra

brianbeaudry
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7 posted 2002-02-06 07:05 PM


I feel the lonliness and dispair in your words my friend...fear not she will one day be yours Noah...PS...I want an invite to the wedding
walker
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8 posted 2002-02-06 07:10 PM


Love will come and make will make you cry too, the sweet tears of love...(just kidding) I think this is a great poem.
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