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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-02-06 10:28 AM


I Stand In Awe

I stand In awe.
As I gaze at the distant icy blue peaks
of the majestic mountains.
It's crown of white, sparkling, diamond studded
snow encrusted peaks high in the sky.
With haunting shades of royal, purple
and cerulean blue.
To me it speaks.
My heart skips a beat.

I am overcome with heart throbbing emotions.
Above the azure sky, with streaks of baby pink and coral,
are clouds, puffy, white and shaded
with colors of the sky,
It enraptures me.

The misty, magical valley below
filled with majestic trees,
Their leaves the colors of honey,
caramel, cranberries, pumpkin and kiwi
Sparkle in the golden molten sunlight,
it's warming rays pouring down on this ethereal scene.
I stand In awe.

Then I see the waterfall,
luminescent water cascading down
with bits of foam and bubbly liquid of the Gods,
Creating it's own mysticism
as the water streams down
to splash against the hot rocks
and huge boulders,
Whose colors sparkle,
as gems of topaz, quarts, citrine, emerald
And the richness of silver and gold.
I am amazed.

Along the cool green velvet edge
of this hypnotizing lake of aqua, sapphire, and indigo,
Are masses of colorful flowers
of every color, ruby, pink, blue, yellow, gold and violet.
The sweet fragrance of flowers
wafting through the morning air
reaches my nose, tantalizing my senses.
The sweet scent of heather and lavender
with spikes of purple and lilac blooms calms me.
I stand in awe of Gods creation.
I am humbled at this vision.

Floria

[This message has been edited by strbbux (02-06-2002 10:28 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-06 10:43 AM


You made me see it all so clearly, and so beautiful!! Congrats on your 2000 th post!!!
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2 posted 2002-02-06 10:43 AM


Floria~
This is just exquisite ! !

Poetically adorned in vivid colors~

Congratulations on the quality of your 2000+ posts~
It is a pleasure to have you in this wonderful circle of poets and friends~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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strbbux
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3 posted 2002-02-06 11:08 AM


Thank you Sea for your kind words and congrats, gosh, it came up so fast, caught me by surprise. LOL... floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-06 11:09 AM


Floria,congratulations onyour 2000th post.What a beautiful poem to commemorate!





Juanita

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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-02-06 11:10 AM


Thank you Marge for your thoughts and congrats, and oh yes, I am happy to be here, Great friends. So nice to know you can come in and post and feel so comfortable. I thank you kindly. Hmmm I would have preferred this centered but I forgot to hit the tiny box. LOL.... floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-02-06 11:12 AM


Juanita thank you, the 2000th came up so fast I almost missed it. LOL, thanks for the angel. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-02-06 11:13 AM




BRAVO!!! WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...this is sooooooo breathtakingly gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You paint colors of beauty with your wonderful words alwyas, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON 2000 AND MANY MORE TO COME!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-02-06 12:12 PM


Congratulations sweet lady..so glad you have joined us at Passions..Hugs..

                    ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

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9 posted 2002-02-06 12:15 PM


I loved the beautiful imagery!Very nice 2000th!
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10 posted 2002-02-06 12:16 PM


Pretty, pretty, pretty!   Congrats on your 2000th!  

Michael

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11 posted 2002-02-06 12:17 PM


this is beautiful and YOU are a wonderful person and deserve to be here

Kathleen--(Kay)
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Laurie Lee



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12 posted 2002-02-06 12:18 PM


*sigh* I am humbled by the talent He has given you that I can see clearly, through your words, the majestic beauty your eyes see. BRAVO!!!!Congradulations on your 2000th. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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13 posted 2002-02-06 12:29 PM


strbbux - I am in awe of your vision. Beautiful imagery, and writing...

BC

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14 posted 2002-02-06 12:30 PM


Floria...I stand in awe too!  You painted a beautiful word picture for your 2000th..Congratulaions and thank you for your replies and poetry.
strbbux
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15 posted 2002-02-06 12:34 PM


Noah thank you so much, You are one that inspires me with your wonderful words. floria

Victoria, thank you so much. I always enjoy your words.floria

Sopossom thanks, your work always puts a smile one my face floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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16 posted 2002-02-06 12:39 PM


Auguste, thank you so much, I love reading your wonderful words. floria

Irish Rose, thank you so much, and I am so happy to be here with all of you great people. floria

Startime thank you so much, and He has certainly gifted you. floria

Bill, I do thank you, I also enjoy so much reading your work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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17 posted 2002-02-06 12:39 PM


Martie, thank you so much, for your kind words, and I always look forward to reading your inspiring words. floriaNoah thank you so much, You are one that inspires me with your wonderful words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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18 posted 2002-02-06 02:40 PM


all of your poetry is so lovely...
and this gem showcases your gift of imagery, as well as your love of nature...you paint its beauty with your words.
This is a stunning portait of color and vision.
Congrats on your milestone...
It does come up fast when we love poetry.
Well done poetess Floria

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19 posted 2002-02-06 02:49 PM


Congrats on 2000! Your discriptions were so pretty and it brought your poem to life.
great job

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20 posted 2002-02-06 03:13 PM


You are such a nice addition to Passions and this was certainly a stirring poem for your 2000th post.  Congratulations, and keep on posting!

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21 posted 2002-02-06 03:13 PM


floria,

Congratulations on your 2000th!!!!!

And your poetry just gets better and better and better! O Boy are you writting superbly. This poem is just outstanding. So vivid I see right into your soul. MMMMmmmmm. What a beautiful sweet soul, I see. I see God and all of your poetry, right there in your soul, filled with so much love. So wonderful. Keep writing for us, floria. Keep writing.
((floria))
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strbbux
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22 posted 2002-02-06 03:43 PM


Janet Marie, thank you so much for all your kind words. I am not sure I deserve the name poetess, but I sure do thank you for it floria

Rose petal, thank you so much for your kind reply. floria

Mysteria I do thank you and I am so happy to be here with all you fine poets. floria

Thank you so much kind Newell and I see Him in yours. His love does shine through doesn't it? I wouldn't want to hide it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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23 posted 2002-02-06 03:46 PM


Oh what fantastic imagery in this piece, Floria.  I stand in awe of this poem...and I have watched as your writing has evolved so beautifully here at passions.
Congratulations on your 2000 post. You must never leave your computer...you got to 2000 so fast.....wow!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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strbbux
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24 posted 2002-02-06 04:17 PM


HAHAHAHA that is too funny, well yes I do leave my computer from time to time. It wouldnt fit in our bed. haha, and I take cAre of my six year old grandchild, take him to school, and such, and I leave my PC on all day, and just pop in and out,. LOL,,,thanks for all the replies Lyra, You are really fun to have around, I loved your last poem on womans time of the month..LOL..   .floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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25 posted 2002-02-06 04:38 PM


CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 2000th POST!!!
And a beautifully written piece too!
We're so lucky to have you here at Passions!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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26 posted 2002-02-06 04:48 PM


Floria~
It is I who stands in awe of this piece! What a beautiful write of faith and exploration, it's definately a keeper

~Congratulations on your 2000th post~

Indeed, Passions is a better because you are here
And, thank you for always supporting my poetry - it's greatly appreciated.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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27 posted 2002-02-06 05:23 PM


Hello Floria

You have painted for us a masterpiece from your wonderful tapestry of words.  This was beautiful.  Congratulations on your 2000th post!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

strbbux
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28 posted 2002-02-06 05:58 PM


Enchantress you are too kind, thank you . I am lucky to be here. floria

Melissa, thank you so much, And your poetry is so easy to support as it is such a joy to read. floria

Sue, thank you so much, Nice seeing you on here, I usually miss you and have to go looking for your work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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29 posted 2002-02-06 06:54 PM


Absolutely beautiful imagery! Congratulations on post number 2000!! Gosh time flies when you're having fun!
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30 posted 2002-02-06 06:57 PM


beautiful poem and congatulations...2000posts....WOW...wonders if I'll make it there
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31 posted 2002-02-06 06:58 PM


Perfect 2000 post, congrats.
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32 posted 2002-02-06 10:19 PM


Floria darling girl OHH WOW I love this darling girl utterly utterly love it girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you
Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous

You Know I LOVE THIS don't you? You're imagery is outstandingly good, it's wonderful

Congratulations
Well Done Floria
2 0 0 0



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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33 posted 2002-02-06 11:05 PM


Floria~

Congrats on 2000, heres to 2000 more...

and what a stunning piece you have posted in honor...Lovely work....)


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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34 posted 2002-02-06 11:22 PM


Floria - A beautiful picture of a place I think we would all like to view with our own eyes.  Nicely done.

Dave

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35 posted 2002-02-06 11:28 PM


Floria...this got hidden somewhere on me..

Congratulations on your 2000th...Wow...
and wow on the poem...so visual...

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36 posted 2002-02-07 12:33 PM


Floria,
Just think of...

"Stepping on shore and finding it heaven
Touching a hand and finding it God
Breathing fresh air and finding it celestial
Waking up inglory and finding it home"

It seems I just did! And contrats on 2,000. This ain't a race you know. Good grief! Thrilled your here and look forward to many more.

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37 posted 2002-02-07 09:08 AM


Poetdevine, thank you so much for your congrats. floria

Brianbodry, you sure will make it, I love reading your work. floria

Walker thanks so very much floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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38 posted 2002-02-07 09:11 AM


Marsha you are too sweet, and you have no reason to be "green" Ha haha as you are a great poetess...thanks much floria

Greeneyes, what can I say but thanks, love your work. floria

GenX thank you, I hope I took you there floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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39 posted 2002-02-07 09:13 AM


Magnus thank you so much,,, I enjoy reading all your wonderful romantic poems, I am a bit behind but will catch up. LOL   floria

Larry, this is so so sweet,,Oh well I know it isnt a race LOLOL but once I get on here, and start reading, I cant choose which I want to read and which not.......so I read all......LOL am a bit behind now,,thanks larry floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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