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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-06 08:24 AM

White Against Blue

I saw them
dance on air
white against blue
caught my eye
and the very
sight of them
just made
me sigh
one would
fly ahead
then the other
would give chase
the music
then started
for the dancing upon
the wind took place
two looked
as one
in their
floating dance
and I wondered if
what I watched
was winged romance
what had
held them
as they danced
in the sky
what ever
it was
held their fall
in deny

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-06 10:17 AM

Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love looking up at the sky and watching the clouds drift by, all in different shapes against the blue heavens! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this beautiful vision made me feel I was drifting on the clouds, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-06 10:19 AM

soft and beautiful

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-06 10:31 AM

Very very nice, I like your style.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2002-02-06 12:21 PM

rolling, twirling, fluttering . . . feeling free . . . if only in my head . . .

or am i just a little dizzy this mornin? (just making a little fun of myself)

really, i do like this

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-02-06 12:23 PM

*sigh* I think it is two lovers hearts you watch and one was yours dancing sweet romance filled with magic and passion. Well done. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-02-07 10:04 AM

I like any knid of dancing (almost)

This is a wonderful work.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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