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Open Poetry #18

Watching the Dance

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-02-06 06:04 AM

You move so slow, so sensual, dancing,
You catch our eyes our dreaming hearts racing,
The beat, your beat, dance and music combine,
Sound and movement now gracefully entwine.

Spirit of song take my sad dreaming away.

My feet won’t move to beats of drums and song,
I’ve sat without movement for much too long,
I’ll watch you sway in dance spirit divine
Perhaps to take your hand with in the mind.

Spirit of dance take my sad dreaming away.

Sound and movement end with the still of song,
I fade to blackness back where I belong,
With memories of dance round campfire,
Passions to which I can not aspire.

Gloom

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-06 10:16 AM

WOW! I love this!!! I am keeping it too....

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-02-06 10:34 AM

Prof Gloom, This is wonderful. I love the thoughts here on the dance.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-02-06 10:47 AM

grinning, so you like to watch, eh? Love this PG!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2002-02-06 11:34 AM

Sometimes we dance just from within... Don'tcha think??..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-06 12:05 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me smile, may you always follow the rhythm of hope and your dreams and find harmony to last forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-02-06 12:52 PM

Well written poem, Professor, I like this a lot.

~Tier

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