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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-02-06 02:28 AM


Oh Baby!
By Larry Chadwick

It’s what I’ve always called you,
From the first time that we met.
It represents the infancy,
Of our very beginning and yet…

It’s always meant much more,
In that tender heart of mine.
It represents the beginning of love,
Within my soul so unrefined.

It helps me to recall our start,
That put me on a path so new.
The rebirth of who I am,
Demonstrating what love can do.

Oh baby don’t let me ever forget,
The love that burned at the start.
A name that humbles me at its sound,
And touches me inside, every part.

February 6, 2002


© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-06 02:32 AM


Larry - you write these with such a soft tone. They are really good...

BC

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2 posted 2002-02-06 02:34 AM


Bill,
You know that style so well yourself...thank you, friend.

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3 posted 2002-02-06 06:16 AM


beautiful Larry.  Miss your words...hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2002-02-06 09:48 AM


Donna,
Thanks so much. It is good to see you here!

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5 posted 2002-02-06 10:18 AM


Larry that is a really sweet affectionate name. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-02-06 10:25 AM




(sigh) Such gorgeous terms of endearment fill your lovely words, sweet friend, I just know she will cherish this gift of love forever and ever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, swet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-06 12:18 PM


Larry this is so sweet, and we should never forget how it was in the 'beginning' of a relationship and continue to use pet names etc., to express our love.
Good write!  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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8 posted 2002-02-06 12:19 PM


Larry
A very sweet write my friend!

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9 posted 2002-02-07 12:04 PM


floria,
Never used it before...it only works on the one I love. You are so right! Thanks.

Noah,
Turns out you were right! Thanks.

Nancy Lee,
Exactly! Bless you. Thanks.

sodpossum,
Thank you very much.

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10 posted 2002-02-07 10:01 AM


The birth of friendship and love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2002-02-07 07:43 PM


Larry darling boy Oh my eyes have been blessed this is utterly utterly gorgeous. I love this darling boy utterly adore it.

I can’t understand why I keep having to rescue absolute jewels of yours from the deeps of the list. What is it do you think that people don’t seek out the beauty? Oh well, you know I’d find this and boost it back up where it belongs.

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


Absolutely first class writing, This really is one of your utter best, so softly tender I love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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12 posted 2002-02-07 11:54 PM


Interloper,
Indeed...thanks.

Mushy,
Why...thank you darling!

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13 posted 2002-02-08 12:36 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
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14 posted 2002-02-08 12:38 PM


James,
Thanks, glad you stopped by.

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