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Jonas
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0 posted 2002-02-06 12:16 PM


You try to fight,
but they take it from you,
a piece at a time,
until all that is left
is an intangible feeling
that nothing will ever
be right again.

© 2/5/2002

And I lie
Here in bed
All alone
I can't mend
But I feel
Tomorrow wil be OK
-Staind

© Copyright 2002 Gary - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-02-06 03:21 AM


I know this feeling very well, my friend...I applaud you for stating this so eloquently!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-06 12:59 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Gary, this is so very sad, I have felt this way many times before as a young child growing up, where bullies would beat me up and I feel I would never be free and achieve my destiny and this would be my lifestyle and I would have nothing to hope for anymore! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is a wonderful poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gary, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-02-06 01:36 PM


you say so much in a small amount of words!
I'm glad to see you posting in here sweetie, I love your poems.


Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
4 posted 2002-02-06 01:41 PM


I can identify...  just remember, once you're down, there's nowhere but up...

Well done!

~Tier

Janette
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5 posted 2002-02-10 08:05 PM


A very powerful write...glad I did not miss it.
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
6 posted 2002-02-10 08:21 PM


I think humor is the cure-all, so all I can say is...When they beat you into lying down in submission, grab the remote control and turn on cable!!!
rosepetals25
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7 posted 2002-02-10 08:45 PM


Jonas,

   So powerful with so little words.  I can relate well to this.. it is a place I find myself in way to often.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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